In the Mood

lately, i have been in this female mood for some kind of abandon, that which exhales the tigress fire out of my lungs digging the veins from a week's' routine movements pruned to the barest of a payroll’s droll… antiseptic cubicles dictate the rags of chlorine-infected lunch where rooms i strut around have nothing except robotic people, same rye snacks, basins of expired coffee and files of schizoid folio.. just outside, the sky coughs of gas masks rendering a paper bag of humanity to suffocate on clanking bones along claustrophobic subways: such a hemorrhaging day waiting for 5pm to hiss, halt ,and heave… i need to dance with the arms of a jazzy moon fondling my back and whistling the tunes of recklesness when all but the spirit lusts for is just a slice of raw breaths spiraling into tangy punches of rockstar blues... spare me the cranky claws of a friday so sore; i alight like a feline dressed in black lace with cabaret wings, feathers splattered on glitzy cobblestones... voluptuous legs hot and wild sniffing sultry lavender scent of friday night’s parade; and the band notes howl, free like me.
Carol Eastman's Your Favorite Poem by nette onclaud
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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Wow this is impressive Nette! Congrats on your win with this beauty!
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:14 AM
This is another example of your talented pen weaving words that take more than one reading to truly appreciate. You have a gift, dear Nette, that we don't usually see here or on any other poetry site. The complex emotions in this one, so human, a bit of the dark side of each of us, wanting to escape and have the wild freedom, that perhaps our gray world does not allow...it's a wow from me !!
Reams Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Amazingly beautiful write nette! Congrats on great win!
Ebbs Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:06 PM
Congrats on your win Nette :)
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:30 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
Horsch Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on another nice win.....Hugs...Roger
A   Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Nette, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA
A   Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Nette, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
Jones Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Love what Scribe said....manhandle people's emotions with your words...you sure can do a lot that's for sure....awesome and congratulations!
Undertaker Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:56 AM
A great one nette. Wonderful. (: ) Jenish.
Deschler Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:07 PM
I think we all have a wild side to us, and some of us are just better at hiding it! But, the claws do come out every now and then! I really love the descriptiveness of this poem, Nette. Excellent work! Congratulations on your win!
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Loved it nette, I enjoyed the abandon! The last verse is especially good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Minardi Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 10:52 AM
job can really boring and after 5 pm our truly self will rise.. a very good one nette, u sexy feline :) congraattss!!
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on the win, nette
Horsch Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations Nette on a nice win. A well written poem...Roger
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:46 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Nette !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 2:56 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Nette! I'm so so glad to see you won in our dearest friend & dearest sis Linda's contest. What else can i say here? Truly amazing! I myself is hugging it soo much. As the saying goes, many are called but few are chosen ;))) & this poem is really SO great & deserved its win. Big HEARTFELT CONGRATS! By the way, so sad, i can't go home this Dec. Holiday will be on 25th only. Maybe nxt time k? Mc Arthura me after bz days k. TYSM 4 everything! love & many hugs , Leonora
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November 30, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Nette, congrats on your win! This poem ROCKS!! Love it...a fave!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Macmillan Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 8:16 PM
DAMN! Sultry meets introspection, so love this. I'm sure that PD will love this. Pulls the universal longing of women to the forefront. Hey, hon, I thought I'd tap you on the shoulder, Linda wrote an AMAZING POEM-- please check it out. I know it will touch you. My fast went well. I stuck to it. But by 10 am on the Sunday, Man o man, I was light-headed. All I could think, there are people who don't have a full fridge, security & live like this daily. Hope you're well Your poetry is very healthy;)
Macmillan Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 8:20 PM
Sorry, I should have given you the title. SHE CAME IN AND CHANGED EVERYTHING, a collaboration with Leonora. Trust me, you will want to read this.
Fisher Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 6:14 PM
Thank you for bringing me into a poetic world of phraseology that I couldn't even dream of until reading this work. Such a delight.
Carroll Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Hi Nette, A lovely mood indeed! Awesome write.. Ken
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Another wow from me. I love how you contrasted the work place with the majestyof the night.
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