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In the Mood - Haiku, I Love U

a warm summer breeze caresses the open drapes. . . we dance to moonlight For the "Haiku, I Love U" contest of James Edward Lee Sr.

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Date: 1/22/2018 6:43:00 PM
I thought I recognized this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:51:00 PM
I want to be there, so lovely! Congrats! xomo
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Date: 1/20/2018 11:56:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic winner..Way to go..I enjoyed reading this one..congrats..Thanks for dropping by.Sara
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:23:00 AM
So beautiful in its minimalism. We feel we are all with you though... so much for intimacy. LOL. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:44:00 AM
Awesome imagery, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/20/2018 7:27:00 AM
The mood is set! Congrats!
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Date: 1/19/2018 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful , Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/19/2018 7:07:00 PM
Just beautiful, my good friend ... gorgeous Haiku and a deserved win! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 1/19/2018 6:31:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea - truly full of feeling. Congrats on placing! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/19/2018 4:17:00 PM
such a sweet romantic poem Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2018 2:54:00 PM
So romantic Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Lovely! : )
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Date: 1/19/2018 2:01:00 PM
Well done Andrea, Congratulations...
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:57:00 PM
Warm endearing verse, Andrea and as always you promote with sincerity and grace, splendid rhyme. Blessings :) James
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:31:00 PM
SO SWEET, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 5/29/2017 3:37:00 PM
I can picture this one, such a romantic setting. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:42:00 AM
you are impressive, with everything you write
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:57:00 PM
what a lovely image this one gives the reader....beautiful Andrea...hugs :)
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Date: 6/29/2013 6:49:00 AM
Andrea, this is a lovely romantic poem and thanks for the heads up about the Hex, I sure made a boo-boo there, I removed it from the contest, but kept the poem because I like it, now a Free Verse, I will give it another try and regarding soupmail, well, it is my way of avoiding hate mail and unwanted emails from certain people, love Constance
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:08:00 PM
I think you & I are kindred.. Lol is Summer your favorite season too? :) Thanks for the kind words on my poetry. I really like this one. Nice imagery :)
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:21:00 AM
So,,,you're a dancer, too? What kind of music? My wife's an excellent dancer,,,,I try my best. Your poem is an excellent setting for a slow one! RAY
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Date: 5/22/2013 6:39:00 PM
I can hear the music! :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 7:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this poem! Hey, thanks for my placement in your Contest.
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:18:00 PM
very suggestive!!!!! Lovely
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Date: 5/21/2013 6:35:00 PM
loving the romance in this one andrea! it has a very dreamy feel to it, congrats on your win :) and thanks for my placement in your contest, oh the blood, sweat and tears I expended getting that one just as I wanted it haha btw what do you think of the new dictionary on here? I think it's awful, not a patch on the old one :(
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Andy, well done, very nice and romantic xx
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