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In the Mood - Haiku, I Love U

a warm summer breeze

caresses the open drapes. . .

we dance to moonlight

For the "Haiku, I Love U" contest of James Edward Lee Sr.

romancehaiku

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2018 6:43:00 PM

I thought I recognized this one. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 1/20/2018 12:51:00 PM

I want to be there, so lovely! Congrats! xomo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2018 11:56:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic winner..Way to go..I enjoyed reading this one..congrats..Thanks for dropping by.Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/20/2018 10:23:00 AM

So beautiful in its minimalism. We feel we are all with you though... so much for intimacy. LOL. Congrats on your win, Andrea.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/20/2018 8:44:00 AM

Awesome imagery, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/20/2018 7:27:00 AM

The mood is set! Congrats!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/19/2018 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful , Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/19/2018 7:07:00 PM

Just beautiful, my good friend ... gorgeous Haiku and a deserved win! Blessings! :-) <3

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2018 6:31:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea - truly full of feeling. Congrats on placing! Love ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2018 4:17:00 PM

such a sweet romantic poem Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2018 2:54:00 PM

So romantic Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Lovely! : )

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/19/2018 2:01:00 PM

Well done Andrea, Congratulations...

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 1/10/2018 6:57:00 PM

Warm endearing verse, Andrea and as always you promote with sincerity and grace, splendid rhyme. Blessings :) James

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/29/2017 4:31:00 PM

SO SWEET, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Janice

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/29/2017 3:37:00 PM

I can picture this one, such a romantic setting. Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:42:00 AM

you are impressive, with everything you write

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/29/2013 7:57:00 PM

what a lovely image this one gives the reader....beautiful Andrea...hugs :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/29/2013 6:49:00 AM

Andrea, this is a lovely romantic poem and thanks for the heads up about the Hex, I sure made a boo-boo there, I removed it from the contest, but kept the poem because I like it, now a Free Verse, I will give it another try and regarding soupmail, well, it is my way of avoiding hate mail and unwanted emails from certain people, love Constance

Melani Udaeta

Date: 6/5/2013 9:08:00 PM

I think you & I are kindred.. Lol is Summer your favorite season too? :) Thanks for the kind words on my poetry. I really like this one. Nice imagery :)

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/23/2013 11:21:00 AM

So,,,you're a dancer, too? What kind of music? My wife's an excellent dancer,,,,I try my best. Your poem is an excellent setting for a slow one! RAY

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2013 6:39:00 PM

I can hear the music! :)

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 5/22/2013 7:03:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this poem! Hey, thanks for my placement in your Contest.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/21/2013 9:18:00 PM

very suggestive!!!!! Lovely

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/21/2013 6:35:00 PM

loving the romance in this one andrea! it has a very dreamy feel to it, congrats on your win :) and thanks for my placement in your contest, oh the blood, sweat and tears I expended getting that one just as I wanted it haha btw what do you think of the new dictionary on here? I think it's awful, not a patch on the old one :(