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In the Misty Corridors of the Soul Contest

"In the misty corridors of the soul" I fear misery and growing old Confined within a prison cell Of conformity, a kind of hell Told what I can and cannot do Criticised by only you Doubts creep in to do their worst Consigned to feeling that I'm cursed I respond when you use a gentle tone Momentary feeling of being home Is it coercion and control Disguised as tenderness as you cajole I could fool myself and stop the pain Run through the dreaded cycle again My soul lost it's way in the mist Maybe neither of us still exist 3

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Date: 6/28/2023 12:02:00 AM
You are in my thoughts and prayers miss Dilly as you navigate these straights.
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Date: 6/28/2023 12:30:00 AM
Thank you Vickey, that's very kind and appreciated x
Date: 6/27/2023 4:34:00 PM
"there are people to be quitted", and fast, very emotionnal poem, take care
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Date: 6/27/2023 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Yann - I'm working through a lot of feelings. A future poem might give a different perspective - I'm just writing in the moment I suppose. Thank you for your comment

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