In the Mist

We decided to take a walk.
If the moon and stars still existed,
they were hidden behind clouds.

Then a fog hit us like a wave, a cloud 
that had run out of gas and crashed on us,
to further shrink the perceptible world.

Ordinary, walking people became vague 
phantoms that could loom, in film noir 
black and white out of the fog, 
suddenly sharpen and colorize,
only to disappear again in moments.

Sounds, out of sync, or garbled, came sharply 
from odd angles, turning that fifth sense unreliable.
Noises, at first muted, were abruptly amplified as
if the hand of that ghostly vapor ran a soundboard.

A man, moving in stalker-like silence, clops,
like a clydesdale on cobblestone as he passes close.

I half expected a distant fog horn to announce 
the passing of a ghost ship where all be welcome.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Prep for London? Aloha!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:33 AM
I love the imagery here. I saw the original movie, “The Fog,” and remember a date having to walk to his ship in the fog afterward. So this beauty of a poem is a fave! Keep writing!
Vionet Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:57 AM
Thank you! I'm glad it's a fav.
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