Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

In the Mirror of Life

As I stand mindfully, facing mirror of my life,
Juxtaposition of yesteryears’ reflections revive 
Mountains of grief and valleys of despairs,
Heartwarming wins and heartbreaking losses,
Echoes strumming joy and shouts in the void;

Thinking of plans shelved, dreams deferred,
Tears of rejoice and bawl of lonesome cries,
Past of dawns darkening on nebulous skies,
Cheerful episodes evoking days of sunshine
Ambivalent in discourse of seasons gone by;

Distraught in endeavors strived, but failed,
Overjoyed in laudable, worthy achievements, 
Saddened by the hollering of indelible regrets
Callously crowding the path of my ambitions
On avenues not taken, of choices forsaken,
Competing for space in the mirror of my life;

As memories euphoric verbalize photographs,
And stories euphonic stoke cherished laughs,
And celebrations clap the sound of applause,
Endearingly revered and treasured lifelong,
Where, as I cogitate, recalling a life sublime,
Man in the mirror smiles, content with his life.

May 7, 2022
Placed 3rd: In the Mirror of Life Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Evelyn Judy Buehler June 24, 2023 at 10:32 AM Beautifully written, Vijay. Charming reflections in the mirror of life. :)

Shirley Hawkins May 23, 2022 at 8:36 PM WoW! it would be almost impossible to write a more detailed and exquisite poem than this. Perfect in every way. Thank you for sharing it, Vijay. Take care, Shirley.

Timothy Ray May 21, 2022 at 8:07 PM the last lines ring in my heart...this poem also deepens my gratitude that over the last 28 years in recovery i have yet to fail to walk thru that door when offered, God has given me the good, the bad, and the ugly and each were steps of growth and not a regret therein...great job Vijay and this poem is a great remembrance of all the passing moments...thank you

Michael Tor May 20, 2022 at 10:19 AM Wow my friend a favorite. You have written each and everyones life story, with perfection and thought. A favorite. Is there any wonder we need God in our lives. Be blessed my friend...

Michelle Faulkner May 16, 2022 at 3:21 PM You show the peaks and valleys of life's journeys through the mirror so skillfully, I like the third stanza the best, and how they compete for space in mirror's memories, very profound~

Jennifer Proxenos May 12, 2022 at 12:10 PM Amazingly, poetically created, a subject which comes to mind often. My grandfather wrote poems and in the 1920's my great grandfather translated many works of Greek poets into Turkish, - there was a huge presence of Greeks in Turkey - Constantinople - he always used to say to his Grand-daughter - mother- 'Ipatia, if I close my eyes and cast my mind back on my life, it only takes 10 minutes to remember the major happenings or disasters in it' - you do the same in this poem. Kudos Vijay, Hugs Jen

Harry Horsman May 10, 2022 at 2:33 AM So positive Vijay, the poetry is excellent, and i love your last line, i would add 'and his poetry' Vijay Pandit May 11, 2022 at 6:22 AM So very kind of you--much appreciate Harry--many thanks,

Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2022 at 12:05 PM This is very beautiful Vijay. To be content with your life means you are living it right with the divine source. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit May 9, 2022 at 3:17 PM So very kind of you, Connie. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan May 9, 2022 at 1:28 AM Wow you have beautifully crafted the life's lessons through the wonderful words... "Man in the mirror smiles, content with his life" These words tell us about your meaningful life... Fantastic poetry... A fav for me... Vijay Pandit May 9, 2022 at 6:44 AM Thank you for your complimentary remarks and your FAVE, Supraja. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. So good to hear from you.

Judy Ball May 8, 2022 at 4:38 PM Loved his Vijay. A fave for me. God Bess, JB Vijay Pandit May 9, 2022 at 6:42 AM Thank you Judy for your precious comment and FAVE. Much appreciate your visit, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 8, 2022 at 6:25 AM Facing the challenges and following the paths of life is not an easy matter but is something it has to be done. Your verses inspire and show the way, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings! Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 6:40 AM Your words always enlighten my friend. Much appreciate your feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands May 8, 2022 at 5:11 AM You have covered the different roads of life we travel through so well Vijay with a beautiful ending of contentment! It shows we can all go through an array of things and still be content. Well done! :) Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 6:39 AM I concur with your analysis and insight my friend. Much appreciate, Heidi--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham May 8, 2022 at 2:31 AM Life can sometimes be a roller-coaster of highs and lows and happy and content is the man who takes it all in his stride. Well written Vijay and best of luck. Tom Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 5:03 AM You are right, Tom, about the roller-coaster ride of life. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks.

Valsa George May 7, 2022 at 11:11 PM Beautiful write as ever Vijay ! After all the crushing defeats and exhilarating victories, aches and pains, joys and hopes, if you can look at the mirror of life with a contented smile, you are a winner, no doubt! I wish this lovely penning all the Best ! Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 5:01 AM So very kind of you, Valsa. Your feedback is always much valued and appreciated. Many thanks for your kind remarks my friend.

Susan Lawrence May 7, 2022 at 9:09 PM Awesome writing my friend ! A fav ! I can’t wait to read this again and marinate in your eloquent vocabulary and poignant heartfelt reflections . All the best for a win . Sending blessings. You are always an inspiration! Susan :) Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 5:00 AM So very kind of you my friend. A special treat to receive your FAVE, Susan. Much appreciate your valued feedback. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Brandy Nicole May 7, 2022 at 8:35 PM Your reflection shares the many facets of *your* life. Indeed, we all have tangled around these emotions and moments. (Such is life) This thought lifts my heart. "Man in the mirror smiles, content with his life." I know this feeling. Being content with your surroundings is a wonderful feeling. Your thoughts caress softly around me. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:57 AM Thank you my dear friend for your visit and comments. Always a joy to read your insights. Much appreciate--many thanks, Brandy.

Sotto Poet May 7, 2022 at 6:24 PM You have written great poetry, Vijay. In life, there are indeed peaks and valleys. And additionally, when we solve a mystery, we aspire to view a striking picture. We make silly mistakes, but we grow from them. Excellent use of metaphors and rationality. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:53 AM Everything you say about life is so true my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Mystic Rose Rose May 7, 2022 at 4:17 PM I can see the mirror has a clear view of you. Perhaps your keen perception has something to do with the amazing reflection. May God always bless you with perfect vision, sending you my best winning wish, :) Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:51 AM Many thanks my friend for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Vienna.

Alexis Y. May 7, 2022 at 3:34 PM WoW! Vijay, I think you nailed this contest challenge. If I were to look in the mirror of life, I don’t think I would be write down what I saw as brilliantly as you did. Best wishes in the contest. Excellent job , my talented friend. Have a nice day;-) Alexis Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:50 AM Glad you liked the poem my friend. So special to read you complimentary remarks, Alexis. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Bill Baker May 7, 2022 at 3:29 PM Wonderful vocabulary, Vijay. Your reflections or expressed in general terms that touch so many facets of life. You've had a panoramic view of life filled with the experiences that have brought you to this point of your evolution. Kudos for your attitude and acceptance of the life you've lived so far. I happy to be one of many that call you a poet friend. Thanks for sharing through your eloquent poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:48 AM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate your valued feedback. Many thanks, Bill.

Kim Rodrigues May 7, 2022 at 2:13 PM Callously crowding the path of my ambitions: great line. Love the positivity in final lines. After all when we look in the mirror we hope to see a lovely picture, after the puzzle is completed. We make mistakes but we grow through them. Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:47 AM So true and well said, Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar May 7, 2022 at 1:47 PM Brilliant. That is life. Ups and downs. Great arguments and visual. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit May 8, 2022 at 4:46 AM Much appreciate, Victor--many thanks for your kind remarks.