in the midst of magic

have a wonderful week everyone
I will respond to any and all soon
thank you
peace and blessings

"in the midst of magic"

quietly I live to dance
moving to all musicals
for a beating heart
for a breathing soul
secretly I dance to live

such radiance beckons to open
alive and free am I
twirling up and down
twirling side to side
proudly for spirits to see

while in the midst of magic
I'm lifted beyond rainbows
high above pain
high above darkness
dreaming for music to play

SkyWatcher
12-05-23

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Date: 12/19/2023 3:52:00 AM
Dear, sweetest Lisa, what a truly wonderful poem. Absolutely gorgeous! The title is magical too. So beautifully, poetically expressed. There is so much joy but sadness too. I’m so sorry sweet one that you suffer chronic pain. The last stanza, in particular, is so poignant. I’m so glad that you find some comfort with music and dance if only in dreams to carry you away for a while over the rainbow. Keep dreaming and believing my lovely friend.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 1/8/2024 6:57:00 AM
It is now my turn to say Dear Christina. Good Morning. I'm so sorry for this late response. You are a blessing and beautiful. Truly. I hope the holidays went well. May 2024 bring all good things for you with peace and much more. Words do not express my appreciation of your comment of chronic pain. Thank you. Truly. Its been almost 22 years with every day being different. Anyway thank you than you. I look forward to returning to your page and seeing your wonderful work. Have a beautiful day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/19/2023 3:53:00 AM
I wish you a truly happy Christmas full of peaceful blessings. Love and big hugs to you xx
Date: 12/9/2023 12:00:00 PM
Music is a gealing force! Jopu you feeling better. Pangie xxx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/10/2023 3:42:00 AM
Hello Pangie. Good Morning. So nice to see you. I hope all is well. I hope all is well with you too. Thank you for that. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 12/9/2023 7:19:00 AM
You paint a beautiful picture of you dancing your pain and cares away, Lisa. As life shrinks the things, we're able to do, may our memories comfort us as we picture the past moments and feel the past emotions. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/10/2023 3:40:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hi. Thank you for always being so generous and for seeing this particular entry. Truly. May today show you and Sara all things good. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings to you both. I will see you soon on your page. (smiles)
Date: 12/7/2023 6:55:00 AM
Music helps zinc the pain, even if it's for a moment, the molds stay.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/8/2023 1:54:00 AM
Hello Tonye. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I agree with you about music. I couldn't imagine the world without it. Thank you for turning to my page. Have a wonderful day. May music be with you. Take Care. (smile)
Date: 12/5/2023 9:11:00 PM
Nothing more soothing for the body and soul than music and dance. Hope your week is going well Lisa. Your pen is aflame of late. Tom
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/7/2023 3:54:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hi. Oh my goodness, how can I ever thank you for your commentary. Truly. Thank you because my mind is scattered and my concentration is low so thank you... Have a wonderful morning and day and may there be magic for one and all. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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