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In the Middle of Nowhere

He's a seasoned outdoorsman; a lover
               and explorer of nature who frequently
   goes camping, on occasion, hunting; even fly-fishing.
  He's equally at home in the wild as he is in civilization.
          He's usually accompanied by his wife, or dog.

              Hiking alone in the woods one fateful day,
                   he never anticipated the misfortune
             that befell him. He built a makeshift shelter
                        deep into the vast wilderness
         with palm fronds chopped off of a coconut tree.

             Reposing nigh twilight, a rattlesnake crawled
               into his shelter and bit him on the right foot.
                Suddenly, it becomes a race against time
             to get to a hospital, a race he's bound to lose.
          The nearest hospital is fifteen miles away, by car.

                The poison injected into him is spreading
           from his foot up; akin to a metastasizing cancer.
                        He's confronted with two choices,
                do the unthinkable or watch his life slowly
                   and painfully slip away before his eyes.

          Paralyzed with fear and unable to rush himself to
         the hospital as quick movements would accelerate
             the spread of poison, he chose the unthinkable.
         He tied a tourniquet below his right knee and began
          chopping off his leg with a machete to save his life.


Will To Survive Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Silent One
Date written: 10/14/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations on your great win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Seeker Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Gripping tale of raw physical courage and will to live. Congrats on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 2:24 AM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-) Most appreciated.
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Truer tales have never been told Edward. I've read of this type of thing actually happening. Nice bird-up to the end. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Ibeh Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 2:25 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-) I appreciate the congrats and visit to my page!
Ermine Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Oh, Jeez!... Edward, I read in horror, imagining the tale to be auto biographical. Oh gee, well I assume it's not...! A perfect example for SO's contest. Written to grab readers, share in the scare.... Congratulations on a very worthy Win!!
Ibeh Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 2:23 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid: -) I appreciate your wonderful comments and visit!
Ashley Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 1:29 PM
The evocative power of your pen is amazing, Edward. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thank you very much, Susan:-) Your wonderful, kind comments mean a lot to me!
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your podium win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Thanks again, Vijay:-) Blessings to you!
One Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Damn, that ending... is this fictional? Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Ibeh Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Silent One!:-) This is a fictional story inspired by a true story that featured on 'Ripley's Believe It Or Not'.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Oh wow! Yes, in a moment of magnitude we might do the unthinkable. Great write!
Ibeh Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Thankfully he is a seasoned explorer--I would probably die in his situation. This is a story of courage in the face of impossible choices--so well written, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Honestly, Vijay, I'd die in his situation as well, lol!:-) Thank you for the comments and visit, my friend.
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