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He's a seasoned outdoorsman; a lover and explorer of nature who frequently goes camping, on occasion, hunting; even fly-fishing. He's equally at home in the wild as he is in civilization. He's usually accompanied by his wife, or dog. Hiking alone in the woods one fateful day, he never anticipated the misfortune that befell him. He built a makeshift shelter deep into the vast wilderness with palm fronds chopped off of a coconut tree. Reposing nigh twilight, a rattlesnake crawled into his shelter and bit him on the right foot. Suddenly, it becomes a race against time to get to a hospital, a race he's bound to lose. The nearest hospital is fifteen miles away, by car. The poison injected into him is spreading from his foot up; akin to a metastasizing cancer. He's confronted with two choices, do the unthinkable or watch his life slowly and painfully slip away before his eyes. Paralyzed with fear and unable to rush himself to the hospital as quick movements would accelerate the spread of poison, he chose the unthinkable. He tied a tourniquet below his right knee and began chopping off his leg with a machete to save his life. Will To Survive Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by Silent One Date written: 10/14/2020

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Date: 10/17/2020 12:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 10/15/2020 7:52:00 PM
Gripping tale of raw physical courage and will to live. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 10/16/2020 2:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 10/15/2020 5:17:00 PM
Truer tales have never been told Edward. I've read of this type of thing actually happening. Nice bird-up to the end. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/16/2020 2:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-) I appreciate the congrats and visit to my page!
Date: 10/15/2020 4:15:00 PM
Oh, Jeez!... Edward, I read in horror, imagining the tale to be auto biographical. Oh gee, well I assume it's not...! A perfect example for SO's contest. Written to grab readers, share in the scare.... Congratulations on a very worthy Win!!
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Date: 10/16/2020 2:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid: -) I appreciate your wonderful comments and visit!
Date: 10/15/2020 1:29:00 PM
The evocative power of your pen is amazing, Edward. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/15/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan:-) Your wonderful, kind comments mean a lot to me!
Date: 10/15/2020 1:26:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your podium win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/15/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thanks again, Vijay:-) Blessings to you!
Date: 10/15/2020 12:20:00 PM
Damn, that ending... is this fictional? Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 10/15/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Silent One!:-) This is a fictional story inspired by a true story that featured on 'Ripley's Believe It Or Not'.
Date: 10/14/2020 5:29:00 PM
Oh wow! Yes, in a moment of magnitude we might do the unthinkable. Great write!
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Date: 10/14/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Date: 10/14/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thankfully he is a seasoned explorer--I would probably die in his situation. This is a story of courage in the face of impossible choices--so well written, Edward!
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Date: 10/14/2020 2:10:00 PM
Honestly, Vijay, I'd die in his situation as well, lol!:-) Thank you for the comments and visit, my friend.

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