Home » Poems » Freddie Robinson Jr. » In the Middle Of

In the Middle Of

The world stopped spinning, and started coming to a violent halt When we took that first kiss, inside our newlywed house debt bought The world went into a deep freeze, empty hearts were waxing so cold When we went into the bedroom and started taking off our clothes The wheel of worry stopped its turning, as consummating our love started to begin And this virgin journey now near the end, destination as soul mates from just friends Our intimate love started when this jaded world was coming to an end Tears of heaven started falling from above as we were in the middle of making love The world started falling apart as we became one, merging our two hearts The world cried when we were in the middle of making love And we both now know the Adam and Eve sorrows of Our new life was starting as the this old world was beginning to end The world died when we were near the climax of making love And we truly now know the Adam and Eve vow because

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/21/2017 8:33:00 AM

Very interesting, your exploration of Adam and Eve! Loved it! Sadness for the human race but for God, who makes all things new!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2017 4:26:00 AM

Ty for the loving comments, Alexis and Maya. This poem is not a literal end-of-the-world poem, but it is a love story set in an impending apocalyptic world (like today ain't close to the brink.) Anywho ... they found Garden of Eden bliss, joy and happiness, while the world has descended to deeper hatred, more gloom-and-doom. It starts to rain heavily on their maiden voyage first day of marriage. So that is the background for the Noah flood end-of-the-world allusion. That is the emotional framing of this poem. Hope that gives a better insight. Love and peace always.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/21/2017 9:49:00 AM

Hi Freddie, Thank you so much for giving more insight to this epic love story:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/20/2017 6:29:00 PM

Wow! Freddie, What a remarkable piece you have written. I loved the line " Destination soulmate from just friends". This is such a sad deep piece that's filled with love and passion. Did there union happen at the end of world ( coming of Christ)? I will have to read this gem again and again to gain a better understanding. Like always good job my talented friend:-) Alexis