In the Meadows Is My Dream

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IN THE MEADOWS IS MY DREAM Strolling, strolling we are in the meadow: airy and green where asters, dahlias, nod and wink passing their green With him by my side, the hours of dread and fear are gone His blue eyes speak: "we're a match in heaven, always green" Dandelion heads float like little parachutes while we walk, he spinning me round and round in the carpet of golds and green Eyes to eyes meet, no more words from A to Z, we need not speak for our heartbeats duet in vibrato of love so evergreen Afar we hear thumps of small feet and some thunder laughs, He and I turn round we behold our kids innocent and green Father God-- the author of love along blue feathers and yellow smile is watching over us in that vast green... _________________________________________________________________ 8:40 pm , April 24, 2015

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Date: 3/27/2016 4:08:00 PM
Hi Olive, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I did Love the imagery. Long live the green, keep it before our eyes....Into my faves goes this piece. I Love the words and the imagery....Vlad.
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Date: 3/27/2016 1:15:00 AM
Olive, Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/3/2015 3:07:00 PM
And yes it can be as simple as that Olive..' Nothing else will match that which you so well portray here, no manufactured 'must haves' just this..'
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Date: 10/21/2015 7:43:00 AM
I thank you Joe.. I appreciate your comment in this lil poem.. =`)
Date: 4/30/2015 6:35:00 PM
OLIVE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:32:00 PM
thank you so much Skat.. :)!//olive eloisa
Date: 4/29/2015 9:05:00 AM
Hi Olive, stopping back to read your poem again and congratulate you for your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks much Sandra, :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/28/2015 6:06:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Jan, :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/28/2015 2:35:00 PM
Olive :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:28:00 PM
Thanks much PD, :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/28/2015 12:26:00 PM
Congrats Anime. I liked the imagery this poem painted. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:59:00 AM
Anime huh> :D! :P i wonder which one I am.. :P thanks much! hehehe
Date: 4/26/2015 5:24:00 PM
so lovely Olive great pen hugs 7
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:53:00 AM
thank you Shadow.. :)!
Date: 4/25/2015 2:27:00 PM
Dear Olive, what a delightful poem! I felt like I was watching a romantic movie and your description of the dandelion heads is awesome! I've been in touch with Paul and am glad to hear he will eventually return. Sponsoring contests can cause a lot of grief. I always stand by the judges' decisions. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:47:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, thank you for this generous comment,, ;)!!! hugs!
Date: 4/25/2015 2:26:00 PM
Dear Olive, what a delightful poem! I felt like I was watching a romantic movie and your description of the dandelion heads is awesome! I've been in touch with Paul and am glad to hear he will eventually return. Sponsoring contests can cause a lot of grief. I always stand by the judges' decisions. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2015 10:11:00 AM
Blue eyes smiling at your wonderful writes. Soon my eyes will be seen one romantic night. For these walks amidst green shall encompass two souls, this dream that we share shall bless our goals. Love your poetry little one, warm hugs//Dino James xxxx
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Date: 4/28/2015 6:29:00 PM
Soon so soon I hope this dream comes true.. :)!!! thanks much and deep tight hugs.. :)!//olive eloisa
Date: 4/25/2015 7:02:00 AM
Olive your poem is enchanting and soothing and beautifully penned, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Stars and Scars
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:40:00 AM
:) thanks much.. :) that's exactly how i want the reader to feel.. :)! i like your poem. :)!
Date: 4/24/2015 3:48:00 PM
A lovely dream, Olive, so beautifully written, and I hope it comes true some day! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2015 11:24:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for your comment and your wonderful wish for me.. :) I pray and I hope too that it will one day.. :) ~olive eloisa :D!
Date: 4/24/2015 7:56:00 AM
This is a beautiful scene painted with words of true love.
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:06:00 PM
thank you so much ML.. :)!!! it is.. :)!
Date: 4/23/2015 6:51:00 PM
Dear Olive, I love the feeling of bliss this poem left me with and I am fav'ing it! A very beautiful poem written in your inimitable style! Brava! 7
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:15:00 AM
Dear Connie, I thank you for looking at my style as matchless.. :)! I saw this form first in one of the poets here, I liked that form and wished to have one poem on same form.. :)! And i thought the theme of my dream is quite fitted with it.. :)!!!A "fav" wow.. :)!!!!
Date: 4/23/2015 1:20:00 PM
I picture a lovely scene, It looks like...Spring.
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:17:00 AM
I love spring.. :)!!! adorable and so sweet and so lively.. :)!!
Date: 4/23/2015 12:10:00 PM
Your poem is charming delightful and descriptive. "Heartbeats duet in the vibrato..." like sweet music playing...#7
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:14:00 PM
:) wee as charming as my dream NAndita I hope.. :)! thank you :)!
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:04:00 PM
I remember I am smiling when I sleep because he is in the other line, and I smile more when I dream of this... :)! sweet.. :)~ thanks MAurice~olive eloisa! :D!
Date: 4/23/2015 11:39:00 AM
Now this is what I call a great dream, just blissful!
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:34:00 AM
a beautiful dream Olive I hope it comes true for you:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:01:00 PM
thank you Jan.. :) Im hoping that it will.. :)~olive eloisa hugs back!
Date: 4/23/2015 8:04:00 AM
A dreamy take of the dream scene, Olive. Loved it. :)
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Date: 4/23/2015 7:00:00 PM
Kim this I truly dream... :)!!!thanks.. :)
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