Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Ghazal

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In the Meadows Is My Dream

IN THE MEADOWS IS MY DREAM

Strolling, strolling we are in the meadow: airy and green
where asters, dahlias, nod and wink passing their green

With him by my side, the hours of dread and fear  are gone 
His blue eyes speak: "we're a match in heaven, always green"

Dandelion heads float like little parachutes while we walk,
he spinning me round and round in the carpet of golds and green

Eyes to eyes meet, no more words from A to Z, we need not speak
for our heartbeats duet in vibrato of love so evergreen

Afar we hear thumps of small feet and some thunder laughs,
He and I turn round we behold our kids innocent and green

Father God-- the author of love along blue feathers 
and yellow smile is watching over us in that vast green...
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8:40 pm , April 24, 2015

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Vladislav Raven March 27, 2016 at 4:08 PM Hi Olive, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I did Love the imagery. Long live the green, keep it before our eyes....Into my faves goes this piece. I Love the words and the imagery....Vlad.

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2016 at 1:15 AM Olive, Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Joe Maverick July 3, 2015 at 3:07 PM And yes it can be as simple as that Olive..' Nothing else will match that which you so well portray here, no manufactured 'must haves' just this..' Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 21, 2015 at 7:43 AM I thank you Joe.. I appreciate your comment in this lil poem.. =`)

Skat A April 30, 2015 at 6:35 PM OLIVE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 3, 2015 at 12:32 PM thank you so much Skat.. :)!//olive eloisa

Sandra Haight April 29, 2015 at 9:05 AM Hi Olive, stopping back to read your poem again and congratulate you for your fine win! Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 3, 2015 at 12:30 PM Thanks much Sandra, :) ~olive eloisa :D!

Jan Allison April 28, 2015 at 6:06 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 3, 2015 at 12:29 PM Thank you Jan, :) ~olive eloisa :D!

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:35 PM Olive :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 3, 2015 at 12:28 PM Thanks much PD, :) ~olive eloisa :D!

Rob Carmack April 28, 2015 at 12:26 PM Congrats Anime. I liked the imagery this poem painted. Thanks for entering. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 5:59 AM Anime huh> :D! :P i wonder which one I am.. :P thanks much! hehehe

Shadow Hamilton April 26, 2015 at 5:24 PM so lovely Olive great pen hugs 7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 5:53 AM thank you Shadow.. :)!

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2015 at 2:27 PM Dear Olive, what a delightful poem! I felt like I was watching a romantic movie and your description of the dandelion heads is awesome! I've been in touch with Paul and am glad to hear he will eventually return. Sponsoring contests can cause a lot of grief. I always stand by the judges' decisions. Love, Carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 29, 2015 at 5:47 AM Dear Carolyn, thank you for this generous comment,, ;)!!! hugs!

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2015 at 2:26 PM Dear Olive, what a delightful poem! I felt like I was watching a romantic movie and your description of the dandelion heads is awesome! I've been in touch with Paul and am glad to hear he will eventually return. Sponsoring contests can cause a lot of grief. I always stand by the judges' decisions. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser April 25, 2015 at 10:11 AM Blue eyes smiling at your wonderful writes. Soon my eyes will be seen one romantic night. For these walks amidst green shall encompass two souls, this dream that we share shall bless our goals. Love your poetry little one, warm hugs//Dino James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 28, 2015 at 6:29 PM Soon so soon I hope this dream comes true.. :)!!! thanks much and deep tight hugs.. :)!//olive eloisa

Constance La France April 25, 2015 at 7:02 AM Olive your poem is enchanting and soothing and beautifully penned, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Stars and Scars Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 27, 2015 at 3:40 AM :) thanks much.. :) that's exactly how i want the reader to feel.. :)! i like your poem. :)!

Sandra Haight April 24, 2015 at 3:48 PM A lovely dream, Olive, so beautifully written, and I hope it comes true some day! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2015 at 11:24 PM Sandra, thank you for your comment and your wonderful wish for me.. :) I pray and I hope too that it will one day.. :) ~olive eloisa :D!

M. L. Kiser April 24, 2015 at 7:56 AM This is a beautiful scene painted with words of true love. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM thank you so much ML.. :)!!! it is.. :)!

Connie Marcum Wong April 23, 2015 at 6:51 PM Dear Olive, I love the feeling of bliss this poem left me with and I am fav'ing it! A very beautiful poem written in your inimitable style! Brava! 7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2015 at 6:15 AM Dear Connie, I thank you for looking at my style as matchless.. :)! I saw this form first in one of the poets here, I liked that form and wished to have one poem on same form.. :)! And i thought the theme of my dream is quite fitted with it.. :)!!!A "fav" wow.. :)!!!!

Milton Robertson April 23, 2015 at 1:20 PM I picture a lovely scene, It looks like...Spring. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2015 at 10:17 AM I love spring.. :)!!! adorable and so sweet and so lively.. :)!!

Nandita Das April 23, 2015 at 12:10 PM Your poem is charming delightful and descriptive. "Heartbeats duet in the vibrato..." like sweet music playing...#7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 9:14 PM :) wee as charming as my dream NAndita I hope.. :)! thank you :)! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 9:04 PM I remember I am smiling when I sleep because he is in the other line, and I smile more when I dream of this... :)! sweet.. :)~ thanks MAurice~olive eloisa! :D!

Maurice Yvonne April 23, 2015 at 11:39 AM Now this is what I call a great dream, just blissful!

Jan Allison April 23, 2015 at 8:34 AM a beautiful dream Olive I hope it comes true for you:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 9:01 PM thank you Jan.. :) Im hoping that it will.. :)~olive eloisa hugs back!

Kp Nunez April 23, 2015 at 8:04 AM A dreamy take of the dream scene, Olive. Loved it. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 7:00 PM Kim this I truly dream... :)!!!thanks.. :)