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In the Hands of God

My life has been a tangled path with many falls, Each time it was impossible God held my hand; I know whatever happens with me he will stand, The gift of writing given- to release my pain. Mother lost her faith but not me I heard God's call, A little girl opening the doors of the church; For answers in the Stations Of The Cross I would search; Oh, this pain kept all these years has made a heavy chain, And on my heart and soul a scar- a deep red stain. I have prayed to God for the answer to my whys, Why God does everyone that I loved in time - dies; I open the door and wake the pigeons where they perch, Tiptoeing- my feet so loud in the silent glow, God now I am putting my faith in you- I am letting go. _________________________ May 4, 2016 Poetry/Canzone/In The Hands OF God Copyright Protected, ID 16-786-551-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Faith sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place
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June 27, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Broken, Congrats on your awesome faithful win. Love SKAT
Sillence Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Beautiful. Faith is indeed present in your writing.
Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 6:01 AM
A deep yet spiritual verse.... Congrats BW, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Daniel Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Great touching write :) Congrats on your first place:) your personal touch brings a special tone to all your writes that makes them so beautiful:):)
A. Sharma Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Congrats on ur top place win dear Broken .. Great pen !
Dutta Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:30 AM
So touchy n emotional Congrats BO to win
Lane Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Tender words of faith from a tender heart. Congratulations, Constance.
Misra Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Broken, you've touched a string somewhere deep. The loss of loved ones - this dies shake the faith a bit; but then,it gets strengthened once again. Congrats on your win, BW!
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Touching emotional write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Excellent work Broken Wings, congratulations...
Johnson Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Nicely and truly said, Constance. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your First Place win for your beautiful heartfelt poem of faith. 7 Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and the 7
Scars Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your top win! We share it again! Such an amazingly beautiful poem sweet lady, you sure are special :)-luloo
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Laura, thanks for the beautiful comment and the congrats !
Negron Flores Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Nayda, thanks for another great contest and for my placement, honored
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Sorry ................ # 7 !!!!
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:17 PM
lol.. thanks
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 12:44 PM
- Deep, beautifully B.W. ...... give me tears in my eyes .... it's more emotion between the lines, I feel - #7 - G.L. in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Anne, oh yes lots of hidden emotion behind those lines, thanks for visiting ~
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:31 AM
You are wise to do so. A moving declaration.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Richard thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~
James Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 12:06 AM
thanks for a wonderful write..
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:56 AM
James and thank you for reading my poem
Ashe Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:33 PM
I read this a couple of times to receive it's impact and you write from a place that the last line is absolutely a "light" to everything above it! A 7+ on it's content and the BEST to you in this contest! Your depth from experience is heartfelt!
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Walter thank you for the lovely comment, so appreciated
Raynes Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 7:42 PM
I love how you write so freely and with love, beautiful to read your words Wings.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Lewis thanks so much for the nice comment
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