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In the Grass

Strolling through the country park, she got arrested, By the beauty of the lawn with silky grass. Sat on the cushioned comfort of the carpet of green. No one around to disturb her calm. The evening breeze was ruffling her hair. She sat there looking up at the aqua teal sky, With white fluffy clouds sailing by Saw a pair of robins searching for worms. They were combing every tuft of grass. She was careful not to disturb them. Sometime later she heard them winging away, With a wriggling caterpillar in one of its beaks. She thought how grass serves as a sanctuary, To tiny forms of life like mantis, ants, and snails She lost count of the time she has been there, Enjoying the comfy softness under her thighs, And the cool evening breeze caressing her. She didn’t know the sun was about to set, Spreading in the West an amber tint. The purple shade was infiltrating into the sky, Making it into an exquisite canvas of art. Her face glinted in the slanting beams of the setting sun. She closed her eyes in blissful abandon. Laying her head on the velvety grass, And dozed into the world of whimsical dreams! March.28.2023 In the Grass Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 5/30/2023 12:59:00 PM
Valsa, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done !
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Date: 5/28/2023 10:20:00 AM
Charming and the imagery! Valsa, has this contest been judged? xhugsx ~Anaya
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Date: 5/28/2023 7:51:00 PM
I don't think this has been judged. Thanks for your lovely comment, dear Anaya.
Date: 3/29/2023 1:04:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest to me. Rock the list. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 3/29/2023 1:35:00 AM
Wonderful poem, great imagery.
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Date: 3/28/2023 9:50:00 PM
A wonderful scene I could picture in my mind, Valsa, great writing:)
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Date: 3/28/2023 7:46:00 PM
A very serene poem Valda. It flows and its relaxing. I enjoyed it very much thank you
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Date: 3/28/2023 11:33:00 AM
Wow, what a peaceful and graceful scene you have written, I could close my eyes and rest after this : )
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Date: 3/28/2023 11:15:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I truly get swayed away by your descriptive vocabulary, images, and extensive details of nature. I feel inspired! Love and blessings ~ Mala
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