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In the Grass

What’s in the grass and what do I know? There are creepy and freaky things below. All sorts of insects and crawly creatures are among grass’ most fearsome features. I wonder what else is in the grass, seeds and stems in a crevasse? They sprout and spread en masse creating a soft sinking morass. I believe there are secrets we’ll never see perhaps some magic that’s in its esprit. Maybe a fairy goddess or two to order the chaos amid the fescue. Who directs traffic so there’s no collision? Who wields the power for that decision? What and when do they celebrate? There must be one they adulate. Whatever is there I leave to that realm. I won’t interfere or overwhelm. I’ll welcome fresh grass in the spring and wonder more, at what it may bring.
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Ayantika Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 8:01 AM
A warm poem! Congratulations on your win :)
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Akanksha. I appreciate your visit and comments. :)
Gasun Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Very beautiful and creative. We don't really know what's in a grass. Congratulations on your win my dear poet friend Linda! i enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Hi Len my friend. Many thanks for your sweet comments :)
Chunn Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 3:19 PM
I, too, believe there are secrets we'll never see. Lovely poem....congratulation on your win.
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Never see, but always wonder :) Thanks for stopping by and commenting Andy!
La France Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Linda, a wonderfully penned poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done !
Fowler Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Many thanks Constance. I appreciate your comments! :)
Daniel Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Very good writing, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Thanks you for your kindness Jo :)
Chuuk Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:03 AM
You never know what will come out of that grass… Great write, Linda. :)
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Hi Fin. No, there are creatures I can't begin to name, and entities of another world I'm sure ;) Thanks for reading and commenting! :)
Volumes Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Loved it Linda, but I was really expecting to see the sneaky snake come slithering by :( ... good luck with the contest. This is a beaut.
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Hahaha Wen. My first iteration did indeed have those sneaky snakes down there, but I thought of you and took them out. The poem was way to long to include all the moles, spiders, gophers, voles, bees, ants, younamethem! Yikes! Thanks for liking it my friend :)
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Very creative, Linda, I really like it.
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Thank you dear Eve. I am pleased you like it. :)
Wolf Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Intriguing to think about 'what's in the grass.' Never thought of it. Thanks, gw
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Thank you gw. Horton would understand... :) laf
Turner Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Growing up in the country and always being barefoot, I am one who loves the feel of grass between my toes and beneath my feet. However I thought your poem was witty and entertaining, Linda. Snakes are about the only thing that will make me detour:)
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 4:38 PM
It's stickers for me Daniel - I curse those goatheads! And jumping cactus (usually no grass around though LOL)! Snakes and tarantulas, too. Not a lot of grass where I grew up. I grew up in West Texas so I know what you mean. Thanks for stopping by Daniel!
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Linda your contest submission was fantastic. Never again will I set foot on grass. Where your feet may lead you is anyone's guess.
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Haha Las. Don't want to step on someone or their tiny little home, do we? Thanks for stoping by and commenting. :)
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:31 PM
- You never know what you step on... (I love walking barefoot in the grass :) - Great writing, Linda - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:36 PM
I do too Anne-Lise, but where I live now, too many stickers! Thanks for the sweet words my friend. :)
Anaya Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:14 PM
I'm never stepping on grass ever again! A great entry I really enjoyed, Linda!
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:34 PM
LOL Anaya. No telling what is done there. :) I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Bueckert Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Worlds within worlds, nicely done :)
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Hey Hat. Thanks for the read and comment! :)
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