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He was the man I’d fantasized about, Drawn images of across my mind, Colored with hues of blue and red, Whispered tenderness across his heart. He was the man I’d thought of so often, Felt touching my skin with his gaze, Caressing my thoughts with inspirations, Creating soft sensations in my breast. He was the man I’d yearned to be with, Filling my mind with sweetest compassion, Reassuring me of all that is kind and gentle, Erasing the worries that haunted my plans. He was the man I’d dreamed of for years, The flicker of light that burned my attention, A memory penning hope through my senses, Tender sentiments embracing me lovingly. He was the man I’d prayed to know better, A precious idea that would pierce through anger, Crafting warmth and affection with each moment, Compelling my soul to find solace within his hold. He was the man I’d ached to spend my time with, The one who made me hunger for lingering kisses, Reassuring my very core that I was being blessed, Delighting and fascinating, enthralling me to love. He was the man I’d always loved from my depths, The man who made me feel loved beyond my cares, With him, I knew that there was better to be felt, Miracles happen when love like this is a reality! He is the man I’d give up my selfish desires for, The one who makes me dream and believe and care, The one who fills my life with answered prayers, The one I will love until the end of this life down here! I’m thanking God for this man who holds my heart and hand In the Fragility of Dreams Poetry Contest by Silent One (May 17, 2020

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:35:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:27:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win dear Regina :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 8:01:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Gina..
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Date: 5/27/2020 5:46:00 AM
I thought you were talking about Jesus and I suppose this could be about Jesus ot an extent... its nice you have such a love and that dreams do come true.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/27/2020 7:08:00 AM
It was meant for the man I love ~ I love Jesus more than that!!! God bless you sweet friend and thank you for choosing it as a winner. I feel blessed - Love to you and hugs, Gina
Date: 5/21/2020 12:13:00 PM
That is a beautiful tribute to love ...
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
- A beautiful dream, Regina ... to love and be loved ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:06:00 PM
A love like no other to fulfill the heart's desire, Beautifully rendered Gina, Peace and blessings...
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:31:00 PM
Only a woman can write this...only one with heart and vision...Well done Regina
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:43:00 AM
regina!..glad to read you again.. this is a heartfelt work that will surely win high in the contest...huggs!
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Date: 5/18/2020 6:35:00 AM
Such beautiful sentiments in verses of love--you two are blessed!
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:57:00 AM
Love like this reaches the highest apex which many seek but never find. Your poem is incredibly beautiful Regina. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:04:00 AM
This is so touching and full of raw emotions. Beautifully done Gina. All the best. Blessings and hugs :)
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Date: 5/17/2020 11:03:00 PM
WoW Gina. What a truly lovely love poem. The kind the masters wrote. Excellent. Loved it. Going into my faves. God Bless and stay well. Good luck in the contest. JB
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Date: 5/17/2020 10:49:00 PM
So glad the other shoe didn't drop,...and happy for your! Beautiful penning. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/17/2020 9:14:00 PM
Truly beautiful sentiments Gina, well done!!
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:08:00 PM
Gina! How beautiful this is...and a sure winner in the contest. Panagiota xoxo
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