In the Forest Den

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Deep in the Canadian wilderness she gave birth to four pups,
     It was a large dug out hole at the base of a tangled tree;
Her mate for life was out hunting with the pack for deer or elk,
          Some wolves remained to protect and guard her.

She was a mottled grey and resembled a domestic dog,
     Perhaps a german shepherd or a sled dog but much bigger;
Her paws were huge and she had thick fur to protect her in the cold
          But she was so gentle with the pups snuggling them.

As dusk fell she heard her mate's mournful howls in the distance,
     She knew his howls, growls and barks from all others;
They were mated for life and this was their first litter of pups,
          The pups were blind and defenceless without her.

The pack had been more than thirty-eight wolves until recently,
     But farmers had trapped, shot and poisoned many in fear;
And trappers had killed others for their beautiful thick fur,
         So these pups were so important to the packs future.

And then he was there in the den with her and nuzzled her neck,
    He was taller than she and stronger a truly majestic creature;
Crouching with his ears straightened his facial expression was love,
         She moved over so he could join them and all was peace.

                                           In the forest den . . .


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April 1, 2015


Poetry/Verse/In The Forest Den
Copyright Protected, ID 04-659-015-01
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, 100 In A Row - 5
sponsor, PD, Judged

Seventh Place 
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Written for the Premier contest, Canis Lupus the Wolf, 
sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 06/2015

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/19/2016 6:44:00 PM
Well written and beautiful poem congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:21:00 PM
Constance, this was a delight to read! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/16/2016 2:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem on wolves. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. A nice 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/16/2016 10:03:00 AM
A beautifully written poem by you Constance...you have done your research, and it shows !!
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:27:00 AM
Awesome win, Broken W. skat
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:07:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:40:00 PM
Broken, absolutely beautiful from start to end. I like the story you tell... Linda
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:54:00 PM
Such a beautiful write, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings dear Eve
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Date: 4/14/2015 12:36:00 AM
what a beautiful story, constance.. sweet congrats on your top win!
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:28:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:54:00 AM
Such a stunning write - many congrats on your win - a beautifully penned poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:38:00 AM
BW such a stunning poem. Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:07:00 AM
Once again, you have made this more than a poem, but a journey. I love the story told, and so deserving this place of honor! Congratulations, Constance!!
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:23:00 AM
Fantastic write Broken Wing! I agree the wolves have to be protected. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:55:00 AM
Such an outstanding and beautifully written poem, BW, yet so informative with details. My heartfelt congratulations to you on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/12/2015 4:59:00 AM
Superb writing. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:50:00 AM
this poem blew me away Connie excellent pen congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:39:00 AM
A story of one of nature's most noble animal. You have done a superb job of creating a tale of conflict a tale of survival and once again humans acting badly out of fear. I was really pleased with the possitive ending. A Fav!
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:35:00 PM
The wolf is a fascinating beast. This verse provides good food for thought. Enjoyed the read Broken Wings, cheers.
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Date: 4/1/2015 10:24:00 PM
Such a beauty Broken wings! true that man is cruel to them most of the times for his own selfish motives,, Gl in contest!
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