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In The Forest Are Two Cottages

In The Forest Are Cottages Is a cottage built A two story home With a Bay window It has a stone front then layered with bricks Their entrance door red The garage door same In the forest seen Trees around the home Is cleared to bring light Some flowers growing In front of the house Two bushes and pond For the birds to use With their little ones A family lives In this house Deep in the forest A mile away Their neighbour lives near Deep into the woods Why they chose this life No on e knows

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David Smith

Date: 4/28/2024 11:09:00 AM

Nice poem.. Maybe one day you will give us a clue. Your poem though has done its job well and got your reader hooked on something fun and harmless and may help them examine their own life for the better. Have a great week, and will net one be a sequel or a prequel.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 4/27/2024 8:48:00 AM

some people like to live away FROM OTHERS... that IS WHAT they prefere, NOTHING WE van do but ler then live... gi dearest WE ARE back after longe time, How ARE YOU ! kisses AND hugs, alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2024 10:31:00 AM

Hello Alakas, Yes I suppose so. I am fine thank you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 4/26/2024 9:20:00 PM

Very introspective poetry, lovely, Aysha

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2024 10:32:00 AM

Hello Aysha, thank you my friend. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 4/23/2024 1:21:00 AM

So deep in the forest, i see all that you’ve described so well here! Very well delivered, and youv painted imagery so well too! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/23/2024 9:58:00 AM

Hello Ink Empress Hi! thank you for this wondderful comment. Thank you for the light. I also send you the likght. /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 4/22/2024 8:14:00 PM

Sometimes it's good not to follow the leader and enjoy our own uniqueness!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/23/2024 10:00:00 AM

Hello Karen Croft, I do agree we would be better off to enjoy our own uniqueness. I do agree. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/22/2024 1:42:00 PM

Beautiful poetry that conveys profound ideas, Darlene! On occasion. Enjoying life in a cottage, away from the hustle and bustle of city life! A lovely desire for many hearts has been grasped by you. A fave for me

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 2:34:00 PM

Hello sotto, many peoplemdo enjoy cottage life. Thank you for the fav. Sotto. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/21/2024 8:01:00 AM

Delightful poems with deep thoughts, Dear Darlene! Sometimes I wish I lived in a cottage like this - peaceful, and solitary, far away from the madding crowd! You have successfully captured a beautiful wish for many souls. You have an amazing ability to express deepest thoughts in a few lines. Love and Friendship

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2024 10:08:00 AM

Hello Mala, It would b e peaceful to live there. I would spend a few days there. I would not want to live there all the time. I would only visit. I would live in a town somewhere near the water. Love & Friendship /Darlene

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 4/21/2024 7:59:00 AM

Hello Darlene, a lovely poem. Have a blessed day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2024 10:03:00 AM

Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/19/2024 1:25:00 PM

sometimes they long for solitary moments, and the forest offers that and so much more, a delightful poem, full of perspective thought :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2024 11:42:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Thanml you for the lovely comment. . Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/19/2024 12:47:00 PM

Beautiful poem my dear Darlene. I really can picture these nice cottages lost in the woods. I wouldn't mind to be lost there for a while. Maybe not for living all the time, but for spending time sometimes it would be great. I enjoyed it reading it. Great penning. Have a great weekend my friend. Love/ María

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2024 11:46:00 AM

Hello Maria, Thank you for the lovely comment. I would be inthe woods for a short time. I would not live there. thanlk you Maria. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/19/2024 1:51:00 AM

It has always been my wish to write a poem on far away cottages. I lost my muse, but you found it splendidly.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2024 9:55:00 AM

Hello Victor, Hi! I do think that you will create a poem on cottages one day. I know the feeling losing the muse. My Ghost writer gave me this idea, in a title. then i created this poem. My friend enjoy your day /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/17/2024 7:41:00 AM

Dear Darlene, your poem beautifully describes the enchanting setting of the cottages nestled within the forest. I loved how the imagery of the two-story home with its bay window, stone front, and red doors brought the scene to life. You've artistically captured the tranquility of the surroundings with the trees, flowers, and pond. It sparks curiosity about the families who dwell within, adding an air of mystery to the peaceful woodland setting. Great job! - Blessings, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:47:00 AM

Hellpo Daniel, Thank you for this lovely comment. My Ghost writewr gave me the title. From that I created the poem. I hope all is well with you. blessings my cfriend. /Darlene/

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/17/2024 5:52:00 AM

You brought to fore perfect imagery that takes the reader there to see what you see. So well written, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:43:00 AM

Hello Vijay, Thank you Vijay, for this lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/16/2024 8:32:00 PM

Quite a scenic poem. I liked it's flow. The question at the end brought more questions. Very intriguing.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:41:00 AM

Hello Hilda, thank you. It made me ponder to Hilda. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2024 7:47:00 PM

I love that last stanza, Darlene. And I totally agree with you -- unless they are 'Herman's Hermits.' ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:19:00 AM

Hello Gershon, yes they could be hermits. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/16/2024 5:20:00 PM

such an enchanting poem about what seems to be a peaceful environment. Your words were descriptive and made your poem engaging. A delight to read. Have a great evening, Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:18:00 AM

Thankyou Sara. I enjoyed doing this poem. My Ghost writer gave me this idea. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2024 4:37:00 PM

Darlene, your writing is filled with vivid imagination and beautifully chosen words. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:16:00 AM

Hello Soto, Thank you Soto. My Ghost writer gave me this title for yhe poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/16/2024 3:45:00 PM

They must find it peaceful there. I have woods here too, but nice views from the hill. You have written this poem so clearly. Well done ! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 10:14:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Thankyou Heidi. This poem came to me from my Ghost writer. Hugs. /Darlene.

Silent One

Date: 4/16/2024 11:36:00 AM

Great imagination and descriptive words Darlene.. Have a lovely day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2024 11:43:00 AM

Hello Silent One, Hi! Thank you for this lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/16/2024 11:33:00 AM

Very descriptive, Darleme! I could see all you wrote about! Not many woods near me but lots of trees that are greem year round….i so hate bare trees. They look like skeletons. Will send you pictures today… Thanks for being a great friend and pietess. Its already been five years! Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2024 11:48:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, Thank you. Bare trees look cold to me. they lose their warmth without the leaves. Your welcome. Soon the leaves will grow and spread outwards. Hugs. Darlene/ xxx