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Poetry/Haiku/in the forest
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-856-04
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 04, 2023
For the Standard contest, Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show
sponsor, Dilly Dally, Judged 06/12/2023

Fourth Place

Free Chick Spring photo and picture

 

deep in the forest
a bird hums to her babies ...
the silence listens

three oval eggs hatch
wispy little fledglings peep ...
beaks open for bugs

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2023 4:36:00 PM

Excellent haikus and perfect just for spring time. love phyl

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:48:00 PM

Phyllis, thank you so much for the compliment !

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

Great Haiku to indicate show from tell, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:50:00 PM

Lin, thank you so much for the compliment !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/12/2023 8:43:00 AM

Wow, Constance, beautiful haikus - a new way of creating one! Yours is perfect!

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:50:00 PM

Mala, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2023 6:53:00 AM

Very nicely done Constance..

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:51:00 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment !

Eve Roper

Date: 6/8/2023 9:36:00 PM

Beautiful verse my friend

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:51:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the compliment !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2023 6:12:00 PM

love these . Both are actually good haiku even the one more for tell.

Constance La France
Date: 6/6/2023 4:44:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:31:00 AM

awww, this is lovely

Constance La France
Date: 6/5/2023 7:10:00 AM

Jack, thank you so much for the compliment !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2023 12:52:00 PM

- Show & Tell great done, Constance (I did one too...don't know if it's good enough :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 6/5/2023 7:11:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment, surprisingly difficult, hugs !

In the Forest

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