In the Forest

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Poetry/Haiku/in the forest
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-856-04
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 04, 2023
For the Standard contest, Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show
sponsor, Dilly Dally, Judged 06/12/2023

Fourth Place

Free Chick Spring photo and picture

deep in the forest a bird hums to her babies ... the silence listens three oval eggs hatch wispy little fledglings peep ... beaks open for bugs

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2023 4:36:00 PM

Excellent haikus and perfect just for spring time. love phyl

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:48:00 PM

Phyllis, thank you so much for the compliment !

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:22:00 AM

So cute! Loved the lines 'a bird hums to her babies ... the silence listens'. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 6:49:00 PM

Dilly, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations !