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In the End of Days

A 
ravaged
savage sea
seethes like lava
underneath the moon,
strange eye in clouded sky.
It stares blackly out at man,
bright orange iris reflecting
angry flames of waves below. . . Sun fled;
now all we know is Satan in the moon.

For Paula Swanson’s “Blind Faith” contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/25/2010 4:04:00 PM i am still looking for your entry, curious help me out. By the way this is an awesome poem, good luck in Paula's contest,..p.d. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/25/2010 12:58:00 PM Many congratulations Andrea on your win in Paula's fine contest >> James Login to Reply

Cecil Hickman Date: 5/24/2010 8:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this dark one, that deeply phrases the picture prompt,,,and Thank you for visiting my wrods and for leaving yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/24/2010 8:05:00 PM Congrats girlfriend on your HM in the Blind Faith contest... a wonderful write for a wonderful honor... luv.. Linda-Marie... Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/23/2010 1:50:00 PM Dark slant on the picture for Paula's contest Andrea. You have captured it with a bleak but wonderful poem > good luck in the contest >> James Login to Reply

Noel Villarosa Date: 5/22/2010 11:48:00 PM Your words here being tantamount to the posted picture. Cleverly done and good luck to you Andrea. (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 5/22/2010 3:40:00 PM "Oh, that savage moon." Is there a song, like, maybe Frankie would sing, or Deano? How about "Moon over New Orleans." - the savage sea adding effect. I think Satan was looking down during that holocaust. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/22/2010 2:01:00 PM Compelling interpretation of the photo, Andrea, and I really like the form as well. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sheol Moribund Date: 5/22/2010 1:03:00 PM Dear Andrea: Fantastic poem!!! Reminds me of the book of Revelation (The Bible). Thank you 4 taking the time 2 read my little poem and commenting on it. Have a wonderful day. Yours truly: Sheol Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/22/2010 12:52:00 PM wow what nice picture you draw here... and Andrea I changed that line to "slip away" you were right sounds better.. your my new editor lol enjoy weekend love... always Michael Login to Reply

Satin Doll Diva Date: 5/22/2010 12:38:00 PM You are a very sweet person to leave such nice comments on my poetry for the contests. I just joined yesterday teaching my son who is 7 the art of poetry on this website. others are too explicit for him yet. I appreciate the time you take to reply. and it is very nice to meet you also. Satin Doll Diva Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/22/2010 9:03:00 AM Ooh wee--what a haunting piece, Andrea :) the picture really comes alive in my mind when I read this etheree of yours--not sure if I can come up with an entry, but this one's relaly good! Wouldn't be surprised to see this win! Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 5/22/2010 9:01:00 AM Great chose of words in this poem, Andrea! Wish you best of luck in the contest. And thanks for your ongoing kind commenst...Have a nice weekend...Love, Gert Login to Reply

Kim Hilliker Date: 5/22/2010 8:57:00 AM A haunting Etheree, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/22/2010 4:31:00 AM Good luck in the contest...Have a great week-end...Sara Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/21/2010 11:39:00 PM GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST ANDREA, AND YES I LOVED YOUR ENTRY IN MY CONTEST. NOT EVERY ENTRY IN MY CONTEST DID AS I ASKED. ALOT OF THEM. SOME I HAD 2 JUDGE BY THE GOOD JOB THEY DID. I THINK ONLY MY TOP 6 WHERE TWISTED. STILL A VERY GOOD JOB. LOVE THIS 1 AS WELL. HOPE IT DOES WELL,,IRMA Login to Reply