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Inspired by Part 8 of Michael Coy's 'Artemisia' series.

In cold December snow I sniff the air My nose raised high, my paws ready to run The Pack nervously pacing, I sense their Fidgety eager fury, I feel none We neared the border days ago, to hunt The ones who hunted us so long ago To make them face our anger, to confront All of them, before we deal the blow We are with eight, once small and grey as mice Our fur a razzled coat of tatters, fringed Now proud and strong, not wild, but free and wise With white mane, sane and healthy, not unhinged They thought themselves invincible too long Their attitude so carefree as a child's But soon they'll hear the howling of our song Unleashed revenge, uncivilized and wild Too long we were repressed, in cages small Our spirit almost broken, but we fled Our spirit lives, unbroken, we stand tall We live again, our future lies ahead Tonight we will reclaim what once was ours The time is here, it's not about revenge But justice, we're counting down the hours The outcome a relief, 't will be immense No matter where they run we'll find their trail And in the end love wins, their hate will fail *** March 14, 2017 Copyright ©Darren White

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Date: 3/17/2017 1:14:00 AM
A powerful and spirited poem, Darren, really beautiful! The last couplet is a perfect, hopeful ending. I love how you write...with your whole heart. Hugs, Rhonda
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 1:24:00 AM
Rhonda, thank you so much for your beautiful words. Hugs :)
Date: 3/15/2017 12:35:00 PM
Hi Darren, First of all I must say that Michael Coy inspired you to write a good write. No matter how dark this world gets, we have to believe and trust that love will always win. A without out doubt: -) Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 12:52:00 PM
Alexis, thank you. And yes, he did :) Sometimes you only need one phrase, one idea.... Yes, we need to trust that.
Date: 3/15/2017 4:57:00 AM
Hello Darren. So very expressive. Just let me say may love always win. It has to. Your words also prove there is strength in love and strength when uniting together and traveling together. Well done throughout. Have a great morning.
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 5:03:00 AM
It has to, hasn't it? Love should always win.There is strength in a group, the motives however should be pure. Thank you, and have a great morning yourself.
Date: 3/14/2017 10:06:00 PM
Seeking love and justice, this is such a beautiful poem Darren, and also very well written!
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 1:08:00 AM
Art, thank you :) A dream of mine, to see justice happen finally.
Date: 3/14/2017 8:29:00 PM
Powerful poem! I need to read the series! :) Love wins! Yes!
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 1:07:00 AM
Please do, it's incredibly good!
Date: 3/14/2017 6:58:00 PM
Great metaphor in this poignant piece, Duir! Your day will come, love the pic too!
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 1:07:00 AM
I thought you might like this, Budgie :)
Date: 3/14/2017 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful and powerful writing. I'm not familiar with the series but will look it up. Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 1:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, I hope you will like that series as much as I do :) Salut.
Date: 3/14/2017 4:21:00 PM
Rising irresistibly from the December of abuse and cruelty, to regain the throne of dignity ... the Triumph of the Innocents. Magnificent! (And thank you for such a prominent, if undeserved, credit!)
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 9:37:00 AM
The Triumph of the Innocents indeed :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 4:28:00 PM
It IS deserved :) that was what made me write. Trance, lilt? And yes you nailed it.
Date: 3/14/2017 4:11:00 PM
Very powerful poem...I'm with Charma love always wins in the end.
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 4:26:00 PM
Tim. It will. Not sure when but yes
Date: 3/14/2017 3:44:00 PM
Indeed love always win..A powerful message about justice..strength..and will to own what 's ours by right.WoW
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 4:25:00 PM
It will. One day it will.

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