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In the Dead of Night

Electricity crackling, dancing in the sky above And some dead thing moves imperceptibly, down inside the castle below A mad scientist cackling, howls at the midnight moon with glee Devilish delight ... Abominable works being done in the dead of night Obscure in the background working busily, the sidekick, lab assistant Igor simply ignores the ranting of his royal employ Baron Victor Von Frankenstein ... Doctor Doom of the 18th century timeline He with the God complex, is driven to unlock the secret of immortality Killing death would be his crowning achievement, his stamp of nobility He peers down at the dead body awakening Slight tremors of the hand Lips slowly moving, wanting to scream In the dead of night, absent of light, come witness abominable creating Man wanting to become God, giving life to dead things that possess no soul Such scientific evil ... running amok, out of control As the undead monstrosity rises from the cold, metal slab He flails at the doctor like a child, accidentally destroys the lab partially In the dead of night some new horror was brought into this world The living are now doubly filled with fright, seeing visions of an apocalyptic hell As the mad doctor feverishly works on creating a female

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Date: 6/6/2017 10:52:00 PM
I like the imagery very much, Good sir.
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:32:00 PM
Hello Freddie. Yes, this is expressive with a marvelous title which set the tone and stage of what was to follow in the entry. Allow me to say compelling and dramatic. Well done in composition and construction. Now Freddie about that ending thought... (lol) just kidding. Have a wonderful afternoon.
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Date: 6/6/2017 8:10:00 AM
Love this dark poem. Yes man the beast seeks to make other beasts to enslave. Its not enough just to enslve other men, man wants his own monster to use.. Great poem my friend....
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:42:00 PM
Scary! I always felt sorry for Dr. Frankenstein's monster. But now that he's going to have a girlfriend...well, he's a lucky "stiff", huh? lol Anyway, I loved all the great adjectives and adverbs you used in this poem as well as the title. GL Freddie!
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Date: 6/5/2017 10:45:00 AM
Good luck with that one Herr Doktur. :) Nicely done Freddie a dark tale reminiscent of an old B&W movie. I could her the pump organ in the background.
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