In the Corner

In The Corner

Slumped, he sat
in the corner
deaf to the chatter
of his “cornermen”,
immune to their
inane exultations..
He bore the look,
a weary warrior
called to battle
once too often,
asked to bear
one more responsibility,
one more round,
one more beating.
He had studied Ali’s
“Rope-a-Dope”,
slipped most -
but not all –
of the punches.
He would answer the bell
for that is who he is
a fighter, a warrior.
Years had worn him thin,
disappointment had scarred him,
hope had lied to him.
His only respite
the time in the corner
surrounded by those
dependent on him.
Slumped on a stool
wondering when 
the bell would ring again,
wondering if this
would be
last round,
last pain,
final tear.


©3/23/2017

submitted to – In the Corner – Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/31/2017 2:13:00 PM
Wow, John, this is really good! You found the perfect tone and 'voice' for this. : ) "He bore the look..." Yeah Baby!
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Date: 3/30/2017 7:17:00 AM
Boxing as a metaphor for life - I love it! Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 3/30/2017 2:59:00 AM
Wow. I suppose that this is not a boxing story as such. I like it. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
good take on the theme, and a good solid write - congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/28/2017 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on you win !! A great take on a boxers thoughts..
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Date: 3/28/2017 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations John! Well written!! Tender homage! hugs deb
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Date: 3/28/2017 3:06:00 PM
You cornered the market here, john, right down to your last few words...from an Ali fan near Louisville, congratulations.
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Date: 3/28/2017 2:17:00 PM
Desperation and disappointment cornered John, congratulations...
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Date: 3/24/2017 6:18:00 AM
This was great John. I like the analogy of boxing to life because in many corners, life sure does seem like a battle.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:22:00 AM
...and we keep answering the bell Chris...cuz that's what we do....thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:59:00 PM
This is a great boxing poem for the contest John~G/L in it!~Che :)
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl, I think we all sit in "that corner" contemplating ourselves and our lives.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:33:00 PM
A tremendous poem with fabulous imagery and a great analogy with life and boxing.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I was working with the metaphor, glad you picked it up
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