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In The Corner Slumped, he sat in the corner deaf to the chatter of his “cornermen”, immune to their inane exultations.. He bore the look, a weary warrior called to battle once too often, asked to bear one more responsibility, one more round, one more beating. He had studied Ali’s “Rope-a-Dope”, slipped most - but not all – of the punches. He would answer the bell for that is who he is a fighter, a warrior. Years had worn him thin, disappointment had scarred him, hope had lied to him. His only respite the time in the corner surrounded by those dependent on him. Slumped on a stool wondering when the bell would ring again, wondering if this would be last round, last pain, final tear. ©3/23/2017 submitted to – In the Corner – Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/31/2017 2:13:00 PM
Wow, John, this is really good! You found the perfect tone and 'voice' for this. : ) "He bore the look..." Yeah Baby!
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Date: 3/30/2017 7:17:00 AM
Boxing as a metaphor for life - I love it! Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 3/30/2017 2:59:00 AM
Wow. I suppose that this is not a boxing story as such. I like it. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
good take on the theme, and a good solid write - congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/28/2017 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on you win !! A great take on a boxers thoughts..
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Date: 3/28/2017 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations John! Well written!! Tender homage! hugs deb
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Date: 3/28/2017 3:06:00 PM
You cornered the market here, john, right down to your last few words...from an Ali fan near Louisville, congratulations.
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Date: 3/28/2017 2:17:00 PM
Desperation and disappointment cornered John, congratulations...
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Date: 3/24/2017 6:18:00 AM
This was great John. I like the analogy of boxing to life because in many corners, life sure does seem like a battle.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:22:00 AM
...and we keep answering the bell Chris...cuz that's what we do....thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:59:00 PM
This is a great boxing poem for the contest John~G/L in it!~Che :)
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl, I think we all sit in "that corner" contemplating ourselves and our lives.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:33:00 PM
A tremendous poem with fabulous imagery and a great analogy with life and boxing.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I was working with the metaphor, glad you picked it up

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