In the Company of My Muse

On a walk companioned by my Muse along the sylvan meadows We wandered away to delightful realms in unclouded ambience Don’t know how long I rambled warming my fancies in sunset fires Must be for long, all lights were out, the quiet hamlet lay bathed in sleep Above me, stood the starry firmament and the half hidden moon Could see the vast plains stretching before me in moonlight, bare My heart was flooded with joy, my fancies took to wings Got drowned in Nature’s serene calm, my spirit lost in drunken ecstasy In the gentle blowing breeze, the leaves twittered and murmured All else was quiet and nothing disturbed the serenity of the night But soon I knew the East wind strengthening around into a gale And across the moon I could see stragglers of clouds moving past I sat on a rock, lost, so lost staring into the clear night sky Wondering how the celestial joy, made manifest by the twinkling stars My thoughts began floating like a ship over the briny waters And my temporal settings faded away like a cloud in the horizon From the nearby woods, I heard the song of a lone night bird In rising cadence, alone and aloud it fell on my rapturous ears Was it a nightingale that poured forth that dewy delight? Was it the same song, Keats heard long ago cascading from the woods? With my Muse in this unearthly hour let me sit awhile in this solitary bower To my paper, let my fancies in unbroken crystal streams flow Wonder if I can rightly recreate the image that my thoughts enfold How I wish, I could like Coleridge, build a pleasure dome in mid air! First posted on Nov.28. 2021 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile.6.Poetry Contest Sponsor:Mark Toney
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Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 4:50 AM
I enjoyed reading this descriptive and creative work, Valsa. I don't think I have read very much from Keats or Coleridge. I will have to look them up. Thanks for sharing this one with us. With everything has to be just right for me to be inspired to write. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 8:10 AM
A creative/wonderful~~story/write. Enjoyed it very much. Have a blessed day..................
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:48 PM
This would have been enough "I sat on a rock, lost, so lost staring into the clear night sky Wondering how the celestial joy, made manifest by the twinkling stars My thoughts began floating like a ship over the briny waters And my temporal settings faded away like a cloud in the horizon " The rest was icing on this well-baked cake.
Wolf Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Keats, Coleridge... You keep some heady company there, Valsa. Admirable! ~ gw
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:22 PM
I realize more and more these days that heady company will take me steadily to heady heights... ha... ha ! Thank you much Gershon !
Kalita Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Nature at it's peak, magical metaphors, love the fusion of reflection, mementos and gorgeous moments! Awesome share????
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Thanks a lot Silpika ! Your lovely comment has lifted me up ! Keep penning wonderful poems !
Leffanta Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Drifting clouds, pulsating seas, and starry knights will certainly charm a lady . . . .
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Yes, indeed ! They charm men too ! But about ' starry knights', I am not sure of their attitude. Enjoyed your humour Rico. Thanks !
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Enjoyed the journey with you in the company of your muse. Superb imagery created by your gifted pen is truly enchanting, Valsa. The sights and sounds of nature resonate through your words.
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Well, you have made me so delighted by your beautiful words of appreciation ! Thanks a lot sweet friend !
Gentile Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Valsa, I was so taken by your verse! Your muse seems alive and well as the images you have captured with your words now have lain a sense of calm and serenity over me. Your poem is simply marvelous and I completely enjoyed reading it this morning!!!
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Much delighted by your comment, Mike ! Thanks a lot... At some inspired moments, when my muse is with me, I can pen something catchy. But most of the time she deserts me... ! Stay blessed with your benevolent Muse!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:01 AM
This poem is a fav. Your poetry reaches an ecstasy of the muse that is so profound. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:52 AM
Thanks a lot Victor for your lovely words ! Very knd of you ! Have a great week ahead !
Horsman Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 12:45 AM
You mention two of my favourite poets here in your 'company of muse' and yes with their poetry in mind, i add yours to their classic style, Valsa, truly beautiful.
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Glad to know, two of the poets mentioned in my poem are your faves. I too am very fond of most of the romantic poets! Thank you harry for your very appreciative comment ! Stay blessed. Warm Regards!
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Valsa, lovely story I felt like I was there you decribed it beautifully. Is Coleridge a place where you live. Blessings~ Debra
George Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:46 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely comment ! Coleridge is the name of a great English poet... one of the pioneers of Romantic movement. Debra, I understand that you are not so familiar with classical English poets. In his poem Kubla Kan he celebrates a 'pleasure dome' built by Kubla Khan
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