In the Churchyard At Night

The clock is striking twelve;
A breeze begins to blow.
I hear a heavy tread:
Someone I used to know?

A hand upon my arm;
I dare not turn around
(Remind myself that graves
Are dug in holy ground).

The fingers bite my flesh;
A stench envelops me.
I ask, ‘Who’s there?’ and turn,
But no one’s there, I see.

I hear a cackling laugh.
The clouds conceal the moon
As voices whisper then:
‘You’ll join us here and soon.’

I sense I’m in a crowd.
It starts to pour with rain.
I gasp and clasp my chest:
My heart can’t stand the strain…

For Kelly’s Ghost Story contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maverick Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:37 AM
I think you did this well Jack, and see a win was achieved, belated congrats..' By the way how be thee, away down there in the west-countree
Haick Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Fantastic Rhyme, Jack! Hands down, this is a true win! Congratulations, my friend. This goes to my favs today. AlwaysxxxAnnalise
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Jack.
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 11:42 AM
This is excellent Jack. I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your fine win.
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Ahhh..the walking dead!! Frightfully delivered message...but time was too short...unless the gravedigger suddenly arrives on the scene to deliver cpr!!! Congrats on a deserved win, Jack! // paul
Deschler Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 10:34 PM
I really enjoyed reading this suspenseful and creepy ghost story. It gave me goosebumps! Congrats on your win, Jack!
Macfarlane Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:35 PM
A spooky excellent write Jack....I'm staying away from grave yards at night, lol. Hugs
Helppi Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Jack, Nicely done Halloween poem, like the open end!
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:20 PM
When you walk among the dead, it can mess with a man's head. Just like when they were here alive. They still like to shuck and jive. So take a breath and just relax. Even they don't want us to have heart attacks. Love the tribute to holy ground. Peace. :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:04 PM
This is a great one. Freaky! Good luck in the contest Jack.
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:17 PM
OH my, now that is very Twilight Zone material. The poor guy about to die and seeing premonition of his grave! Good one, Jack, and thanks for seeing so many of my poems this morning. I need to really get to town on finding my poems now in my files before I get to the church . I have so much to work on today!! have a good night!
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October 26, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Thank God Im not reading this at night.A great haunting eerie story : )
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