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In the Churchyard At Night

The clock is striking twelve; A breeze begins to blow. I hear a heavy tread: Someone I used to know? A hand upon my arm; I dare not turn around (Remind myself that graves Are dug in holy ground). The fingers bite my flesh; A stench envelops me. I ask, ‘Who’s there?’ and turn, But no one’s there, I see. I hear a cackling laugh. The clouds conceal the moon As voices whisper then: ‘You’ll join us here and soon.’ I sense I’m in a crowd. It starts to pour with rain. I gasp and clasp my chest: My heart can’t stand the strain… For Kelly’s Ghost Story contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/26/2015 3:37:00 AM
I think you did this well Jack, and see a win was achieved, belated congrats..' By the way how be thee, away down there in the west-countree
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Date: 11/7/2014 8:48:00 PM
Fantastic Rhyme, Jack! Hands down, this is a true win! Congratulations, my friend. This goes to my favs today. AlwaysxxxAnnalise
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Date: 11/5/2014 5:47:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Jack.
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Date: 11/5/2014 11:42:00 AM
This is excellent Jack. I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 9:54:00 AM
Ahhh..the walking dead!! Frightfully delivered message...but time was too short...unless the gravedigger suddenly arrives on the scene to deliver cpr!!! Congrats on a deserved win, Jack! // paul
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Date: 11/4/2014 10:34:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this suspenseful and creepy ghost story. It gave me goosebumps! Congrats on your win, Jack!
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Date: 10/29/2014 3:35:00 PM
A spooky excellent write Jack....I'm staying away from grave yards at night, lol. Hugs
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Date: 10/26/2014 8:07:00 PM
Jack, Nicely done Halloween poem, like the open end!
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:20:00 PM
When you walk among the dead, it can mess with a man's head. Just like when they were here alive. They still like to shuck and jive. So take a breath and just relax. Even they don't want us to have heart attacks. Love the tribute to holy ground. Peace. :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 3:04:00 PM
This is a great one. Freaky! Good luck in the contest Jack.
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Date: 10/26/2014 12:17:00 PM
OH my, now that is very Twilight Zone material. The poor guy about to die and seeing premonition of his grave! Good one, Jack, and thanks for seeing so many of my poems this morning. I need to really get to town on finding my poems now in my files before I get to the church . I have so much to work on today!! have a good night!
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Date: 10/26/2014 10:05:00 AM
Thank God Im not reading this at night.A great haunting eerie story : )
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