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In the Blink of An Eye

The old Luzzu lies on a slipway beneath the sun’s strong rays
           In one of Malta’s most beautiful Mediterranean bays

An elderly fisherman gasps when he sees the damage on his luzzu boat
         
           With current rising costs, he can ill afford the to keep this Maltese treasure of a boat afloat

Tears streams down his eyes as he inspects the state of the bow and the stern
     
         The sorry sight gives him heartburn
         
And his face puckers up knowing the unpredictable weather is mainly to blame
      Even the colour of the sea does not look the same

His youngest son stands beside him and consoles his father
      
               But he cries harder
     

Suddenly, the old man clutches his chest and drops to the ground 
          
       The son screams for help but there is no one around

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Date: 3/14/2022 7:07:00 PM
Brigitte, I enjoyed you story, well written. Blessings ~ Debra
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Brigitte Pace
Date: 3/15/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/14/2022 5:26:00 PM
Oh my Brigette i didnt expect that ending ha. A lovely but sad poem. Enjoyed. Deb xx
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Brigitte Pace
Date: 3/15/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you.

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