Get Your Premium Membership

In the Bed They Make

And when will the tides turn against confident indifference?! When will humanity cease To throw cats against curiosity’s silver coated dagger Another played out song Another dramatic lyric Shifting embellished overtones With deteriorating tact They spit posthumous awakenings As divinity laced smiles, wither under a convoluted moon Shedding retina waterfalls Misunderstood Pretentious anger becomes Aphrodite mediocrity Wisdom, they never “put out” Crippled tears Become self-important struts within olive tinted reckonings Lambasted butterflies Stirring hornets’ nest Uninvited They dream for better days While double-knotting gang colored bandanas On eagle’s achromatic foreheads Another Woody Woodpecker band-aid pulled from condescending hypocrisies … And when will the tides turn against pilot light’s mal-intent? When will the flinty sheep Stop wondering how these charring, orange fires began Forgetting the 115 octane gasoline can They hold quietly in their hands ©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 3/29/2020 7:52:00 AM
Strong powerful poetry here! Wonderfully scribed. Thank you for this read. JC Hawkens
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2013 10:44:00 AM
wow! Now that is different, I like the way your poem starts... AND~ unique and your own calling. Unless you can point out another poem in which starts with AND" love the blazing imagery that one struggles to find comfort in. xox~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 7/21/2013 11:29:00 AM
Using "and" to start a poem is rarely a good idea. But, with message I needed to eminate here, it was necessary. No, and I cant think of others currently that start with "and". Thanks so much for coming by, Linda.
Date: 7/10/2013 11:45:00 AM
you got some nice words and lines up there Drake ;} another played out song, in another day, in another played out life . Thank you for liking my " WALLS "
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 7/10/2013 12:01:00 PM
Hi, Debbie! :) No problem! Your poem was awesome. And thank YOU for stopping by! :)
Date: 6/28/2013 7:32:00 PM
Aphrodite mediocrity---interesting line...she was a mighty foe....always enjoy your word choice--you have a talent to temper your ferocity and make it palatable to many readers...victoria
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/28/2013 10:40:00 PM
Yes, she was. But, in the case of the poem, just a pretentious one. I do what I can to make sure I don't completely lose it in my stanzas. lol Thanks so much, Victoria!
Date: 6/21/2013 8:31:00 AM
Powerful write Drake....I'm all for the tides turning against the hypocrites ! Hugs
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/21/2013 8:34:00 AM
You're damn right! ;) Thank you so much, Cecilia!
Date: 6/20/2013 2:02:00 PM
A great poem you have penned here today. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/20/2013 2:21:00 PM
Hola, Lucilla! Thanks very much!
Date: 6/19/2013 2:35:00 PM
this is a very powerful poem. Great words eloquently penned.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/19/2013 2:51:00 PM
Hey Andrea! Thank you so very much! :)
Date: 6/17/2013 8:41:00 PM
WOW.. The evil forces must meet their demise. We cannot be lulled into complacency as there is too much at stake. Powerful write :)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/17/2013 9:07:00 PM
You got that right, Karen. ;) Many, many thanks!
Date: 6/16/2013 7:54:00 PM
Drake...you touch me deep inside....here...life teaches us some hard tough lessons sometimes along with the good fuzzy warm ones...when you see the injustices and just plain old giving up of people...makes you want to shout..wake up!!!!! Great poem....
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/16/2013 8:08:00 PM
Spot on, Donna. Spot on. I'm very grateful for your commentary. :)
Date: 6/16/2013 3:20:00 AM
happy father's day to your dad. drake... back to poetic work after?.. :) huggs
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/16/2013 10:34:00 AM
Aww, thanks! I'll let him know. :) Yes, of course. ;)
Date: 6/15/2013 12:27:00 PM
Very powerful poem.Humanity thinks for better days..but thinking isn't enough if badly deeds overcome every good wish.Do i get it?: ) Wow how you make my mind 's wires of plus and minus think B-)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/16/2013 10:33:00 AM
Yes, pretty much, Charmaine. :) I'm SO happy to read that! :) Thank you, as always, Charmaine for being here.
Date: 6/15/2013 7:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a great weekend Drake. If you are a dad happy Fathers Day. If you get a chance soup mail me I would like to learn a bit about who you are.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/15/2013 10:17:00 AM
Awesome! I'm not a Dad, but that's cool of you to mention anyway. I'll message ya.
Date: 6/15/2013 12:49:00 AM
It's an interesting technique starting a poem out with the word "And". As if it was in the middle of a conversation... brings more emphasis to an on-going situation. The cat part confused me at first until I remembered the old saying. After reading Richard's comment I find myself subconsciously nodding my head... I believe the message is more rewarding when no one's holding your hand through the deciphering of it... more rewarding when you have to dig to uncover it :)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/15/2013 1:07:00 AM
Yes, good call. I rarely ever start with "And". But, I had to change it up a tad. :) LOL I'm glad I stumped you on the cat line. Had to twist that up too. Yes, I couldn't agree with you more. Many, many thanks, Tim!!!! :)
Date: 6/14/2013 8:13:00 PM
I don't know how you come up with your word combinations yet somehow in your own weird way you connect them. In some way you bend my mind and magically they seem to make sense. Now that my friend is talent.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/15/2013 1:06:00 AM
I have a thing for word combos, and it started from a Pink Floyd song, "Comfortably Numb". The rest is probably self-explanatory. :) Thank you so very much, Richard!
Date: 6/14/2013 6:10:00 PM
One bang up ending there shouting against persecution, prejudice and indifference. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/14/2013 6:27:00 PM
Hi, Debbie! :) Thanks very much for that.
Date: 6/14/2013 11:39:00 AM
Wow!!! Brilliant, the words are powerful & provoking...really enjoyed reading drake....thankyou:0)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/14/2013 3:00:00 PM
Hi Cherie! Thanks so much for that. :)
Date: 6/14/2013 10:41:00 AM
Yes Drake, then you come up with these powerful writes and then you question why I say you are a master at what you do ;) awesome title to go with this write of yours ;) hope your weekend will be a brilliant one! Love Wilma
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/14/2013 10:42:00 AM
:) Wilma, you're awesome. Thank you very, very much. (HUGE HUG!)
Date: 6/14/2013 7:56:00 AM
You are an master of the written word, my friend! Kudos to you... cheers, Jack
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/14/2013 8:07:00 AM
Hey, Jack!!! :) It's great to see you here! Many thanks! I do appreciate it!
Date: 6/14/2013 7:50:00 AM
Blown away... again. This one goes to my faves! You are a wordsmith, my friend.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/14/2013 8:06:00 AM
(Blush) Thank you, Heather. :) I'm grateful for that.
Date: 6/13/2013 3:42:00 PM
Great message of accountability - Art with a larger purpose - superb language, and a skilled touch of abstarction throughout - well done Drake - Humanity needs no pity -J.A.B. %
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 9:38:00 PM
Hey Justin! I remember you! Cool to see you here again! Accountability is fading at a terrible rate. It's up to us to keep it alive & strong. No, humanity certainly doesn't...thanks so much for stopping by here!
Date: 6/13/2013 1:00:00 PM
The ups and downs of life and the hypocrisy that fill it. What a wonderful poem you wrote here, Drake. *hug*
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 1:23:00 PM
You got that right. Thank you very kindly, Shirley. :) I'm very happy you stopped by.
Date: 6/13/2013 12:42:00 PM
Wow I need time on this to understand the finer points xx
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 1:22:00 PM
Hey Mandy!!! :) Take your time with my lines. It's awesome of you to even stop by here! Thanks so much!
Date: 6/13/2013 12:27:00 PM
I agree with Kim on the favorite line! How do you bring words together...I also liked confident indifference. Your poetry makes me feel like a simpleton! Way to go, Drake! :) Hugs! The ending..WOW! We are like those sheep often!
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 1:22:00 PM
Hi, Eileen!! :) I don't know. I just connect them in my goofy little brain. I'm odd like that. Your words are well above just a "simpleton". Promise! Yes, many are part of the herd. But, it only takes one to lift their head about them and look into the horizon. Thank you SO much, Eileen!! :)
Date: 6/13/2013 11:47:00 AM
Man alive!! Where do you get all this inspiration from.. it makes my poetry feel like a 'dum--dee-dum--dee dah ! You are very gifted. Best line="Shedding retina waterfalls"-- such a sophisticated description of crying. X
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 1:14:00 PM
I get it from life. Society, sadly, doesn't help very much either. Your poetry is top shelf grade. Never let any other tell you otherwise. Kim, you rock. I am so happy you came by here. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
such a visceral rant, drake...humanity needs enlightenment; extraordinary work!...:) huggs
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 6/13/2013 1:09:00 PM
Humanity needs it more than we can imagine. Thank you so very much, Nette! :)
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things