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In the August Heat

(Even Poetry can recall the warm days of summer.) ** In the August Heat ** ——————————————————————— August roasts the red pears Sitting crowded on the sill…Spoiling With no protection from The open, lime-tinted curtains Speckled with tiny violets. Shimmering sunbeams stream diagonally Through the room’s air, while outside, A lost cricket, cornered under a deck step, Chirps! A repeating string of chirps! His true place is elsewhere In the night, by a willing mate. The natural Balance of his 250-million-year-old species Is upset — with only the heat sustaining him… With his chirping! Chirping rondo! With the promise that she will come. So, there he crouches. Night…Night will come. Heat will stay. His summer life yet has time to go. So he waits. Chirping! His chorus repeats! She will come. They will touch when meeting Then flee on to their otherwhere. The coming night’s course will please. So he waits…Earnestly chirping! Feeling the vibrations along his black back, He waits. In his summoning melody, He chirps! And, she will come. ———————————————————- (c) sally young Eslinger 1/2022

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Date: 1/21/2022 9:58:00 AM
Opening line dances in my mind then lime-tinted curtains speckled with tiny violets! He chirps and she will come - the passion of the cricket, of nature! Love it, Sally!
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Date: 1/15/2022 2:49:00 PM
What a lovely seasonal write with exquisite metaphors Sally, a joy to read.
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:28:00 PM
I love all the summery imagery here, warms my heart in this chilly January day - I have always been charmed by the chirping of crickets, it is a melody that belongs in the heat soaked month of August, for sure~
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Date: 1/14/2022 4:40:00 PM
Great poem. You brought this world to life Sally, well done.
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Date: 1/14/2022 9:57:00 AM
Lovely, sensitive write -- their chirping can drive you crazy, but I always try to get them out of the house unharmed. What the heck...maybe someday the cricket guardian will put in a good word for me. Excellent poetry!
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Date: 1/13/2022 11:53:00 AM
how unusual this is and such a joy to read this from you today
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Date: 1/13/2022 6:18:00 AM
Clever Poetry, a joy to read this. All the best for the New Year. Sally. Harry
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:56:00 AM
Great narration! Beautiful imagery. Cricket enjoys. Wish to read more from you. Kindly keep writing.
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Date: 1/12/2022 9:19:00 AM
love the warm feeling you've written in your verse. Great imagery and natures sounds. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2022 8:05:00 AM
So romantic even for a cricket. Wish summer is here though mosquitoes are a pest. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/12/2022 6:47:00 AM
You are able to make the desires of this little cricket seem romantic Sally. A charming gift your poem provides. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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