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In Summertime

One week more, and it is summertime. Done will be sweet spring, but in the sky Sun climbs high now. Children want to have Fun while parents in the heat may fry! There is a way for all to beat the heat - Where children love to go when not in school. Bare your midriff. In the pool go play! Glare of sun's less bothersome! You’ll stay cool! June 15, 2021 (Lento with Rhymes at both beginning and end of lines) For A Brian Strand 4 To 14 Line Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/5/2021 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Hello To Summer. One can stay cool at the pool just don't get burned by the summer sun. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 7/5/2021 6:04:00 AM
Summer is here we have sunshine and folk are out on the beach, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2021 10:20:00 PM
Nice welcome to summer. Congratulations, Andrea.
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Date: 7/4/2021 9:52:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/25/2021 11:21:00 AM
-Lento poems I do not see so often ... I had to choose this :) - A time we all look forward to ... just do what one wants ... and no alarm clock ... enjoy, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2021 4:38:00 PM
Hello Andrea … summer. Something for me to dream about at this time. Your poem certainly explains warmth Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 6/19/2021 4:24:00 AM
Your love of Summer shines through in this amazing work of art, Andrea:)
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Date: 6/18/2021 8:22:00 PM
Your Lento is Filled with gorgeous summer seasonal scenery, and this really is something to see. I liked reading this. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend, Andrea.
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Date: 6/16/2021 12:35:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You captured summer very well in your well penned Lento. Best wishes in the in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/16/2021 11:40:00 AM
Summer beautifully captured! All the best for contest
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:44:00 PM
We are enjoying the summer in India. Very irritatingly interesting.
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:14:00 PM
Here summer is in full swing. Bathers abound. Lovely thoughts.
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:26:00 PM
Good one, Andrea. I loved it...even made me feel cool in the 90 degree heat. Best wishes for Joseph's contest.
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Date: 6/15/2021 4:13:00 PM
Really cool and very creative Andrea.
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Date: 6/15/2021 3:14:00 PM
Wonderfully spun with rhymes on both ends. Lovely anticipation of summer, Andrea.
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Date: 6/15/2021 2:41:00 PM
For me, summer gets too humid sometimes but I loved the local swimming pool when I was a kid, very smart lento!
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