In Summer's Heat

Two candles burning down to wax -that’s how
I felt that one hot summer long ago -
a summer I remember even now
with images I never can let go.
Beside the ocean in the sun we lay,
flirtatiously, toes touching in the sand!
Into the waves we jumped like kids at play,
but how I simmered when you took my hand
to stroke my palm. Interlacing fingers,
we watched the sun go down in the twilight.
Slow boil on days like those – passion lingers,
then builds to climax in the shadowed night.
In summer’s heat I learned the meaning of
new feelings as I melted into love.

June 6, 2020 for John Hamilton's Summer Heat Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 10:37 PM
John got some fantastic entries for his contest Andrea. I am glad we both made the winner's list. I am trying to keep up here but my modem being down for three days really set me behind. Your last line ended this perfectly. Congratulations on your win with this romantic poem. xxoo
Mishra Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea. Keep writing and inspiring. Much love :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Andrea for this nice sonnet, congrats on placing, a lot of great poems got left out with only fifteen placements but you made it!
Mishra Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Oh this is such a cozy read full of blazing love and winking emotions. You weave love with a little playfulness. Such a hot to read from you. Best wishes for the contest Andrea :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 5:48 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea! Summer heat with a tender touch of romance...A FAVE. hugs, Rhonda xx
Makama Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 8:05 PM
This is tenderly well expressed... Summer so loved, so true, so anticipated and so enjoyed. This is wonderful my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Innocent delicate summer love; beautifully penned my friend!
Watt Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:26 AM
You know how to turn up the heat! I loved your volta, "but how I simmered when you took my hand", where the heat really starts to get turned up. GREAT sonnet, my dear friend, one which should excel in the summer heat contest ~ John
Daniel Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:56 PM
Very passionate and romantic sonnet, Andrea:) love the ending:) I am doing well by God's grace, hope you too are fine:)
Adams Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 9:05 PM
summer and love seem to go hand and hand... this one moves along wonderfully... great job my friend! best wishes in the contest... hugs
Theraven Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Andrea, Lovely Summer's swelter; another is almost here. What a blockbuster this Summer would make. Corvette Summer, Endless Summer, Summer of 42, Jaws, Stand by Me, American Graffiti, Point Break, & Grease all rolled into one. -Richard
Michael Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Hot ... Burning in the flames of love...A little romantic scene here...
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 2:09 AM
Romantic and classic Andrea, just like I love. I think John will love yours. Blessings xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Passionate, sensual story poem that skillfully explores the theme of Summers Heat, Andrea. Wonderful entry for the contest. Best of luck in the contest.
Bauer Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 2:50 PM
just beautiful, andrea! masterfully written...
Pandit Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Your sonnet flows so naturally, effortlessly --and creates a wonderful episode of love in summer heat. Great write, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Very romantic Andrea, no better place to be with the one you love than by the sea. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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