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Edward Ibeh's This or That, Vol.34 Contest...22 Jun 25
At last, the traffic comes to a halt.. the powdered clouds peep between hill tops as a lingering sigh pinches my flesh-- half weary, half shimmering in hours moist with late afternoon's need for quietude. Clearing my mind to embrace sweet ardor's mist and the fire of gentle touches, I feel the sense of grandeur in stars above , of his affection blazing like a spark-- my face awakened from toil of hours before-- Resting a bit to capture hints of stillness borne from the glimmer of this temporal lush, we gather each other --- fondling the light, gazing at nova streaks so beguiling, our affection cuddled by glazed ardor; inhabiting the pleasure of now.

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Date: 6/24/2025 6:38:00 PM
Really and truly beautiful.
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Date: 6/23/2025 12:45:00 PM
Such beautiful, lush imagery, Nette, yet never does it bog down the story. Clearly and poetically, all is emotively told in a way that beautifully enfolds. Cheers for this ... CayCay
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Date: 6/22/2025 8:24:00 PM
Nette, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 6/22/2025 12:35:00 PM
"In Stars Above" is a wonderful write to read. Enjoyed... "Good Luck" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 6/22/2025 11:50:00 AM
Nette, you've written an excellent poem on love, peace, and the beauty of shared times in nature. It depicts a tranquil yet intense interaction between two people who find consolation in one another's company against the backdrop of a beautiful countryside.
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