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Written on 15 June 2025 for 'This or That', Poetry Contest ('In Stars Above') Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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What I see in stars above is extremely wearisome, with useless inane details that I wish I never knew. Light years, space-time, black holes, big bangs, myriads of pricks 'n specks a billion miles away - who cares? I've been over-dubbed, deluded, and robbed, of the romance, songs, stories, and delightful spiritual legends that ancient master star gazers saw in stars above. Hunter and archers with sword, belt, arrows and shield, A veritable zoo of animals - lion, ram, bull, bear, llama, emu, goat, scorpion, fish and severed heads, under arms. Pots and pans, the scrub-a-dub dish that ran away with the spoon. Regal Heracles, Achilles and Troy in battles raging skyward Bickering Gods, Virgins, Kings and Queens with kids and twins. Action-men Pharaohs, wannabee Gods, leaping from pyramid tops, onto the ladder of the Milky Way, which is - The River of Heaven, Road of Souls The Spilled Breast Milk of Hera the Mother God The seed-strew pathway the mighty Emus trod, pecking their way, In stars above. We all should get out and look up more! Gazing with ancient eyes into the sky above, reveling to see and enjoy what they saw, in stars above.

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