In Search of the Mind

(This poem was published in Every Day Poets. Enjoy the read!!!!)


“You have lost your mind!”
they told him. His eccentricities
surpassed the boundaries
they regarded as
normal.
Determined to get his mind back,
he searched forest, roadside,
bridge, cemetery….everywhere he remembered
visiting; wondering whether his mind existed or not,
because he had memories.


By: Teddy Kimathi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duet Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Hi Teddy! I was just reading a few of your poems and ran across this one. Just wanted to tell you that I liked it.
Kimathi Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Thanks so much Carol!! *^_^* Thank you for letting me know!! *_^
De Burca Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:50 PM
A great poem congrats on your win.
Kimathi Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Thank you so much, Seosamh!! ;-)
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Nice write, Teddy! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Kimathi Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thank you so much, Kim!! *^_^* Blessings to you too!! ****
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
Kimathi Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, BL!! :-)
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Teddy Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:09 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Skat!!! *^_^* <3
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Thank you so much, Linda!! *^_^* <3
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Teddy, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:00 AM
Thank you so much, Skat!! *^_^*
Deschler Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Congrats on 5th place!... I really enjoyed this clever write. Nicely penned, Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:58 AM
Thank you so much, Kelly!! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:47 PM
congrats on your win and your publication Teddy:- ) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Thank you so much, Jan!! *^_^*
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :)
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Hi Teddy, nice win, I have a fun blog for all my winning poems. Stop by and enjoy IF YOU LIKE. Just in case you don't know which blog belongs to this particular contest. Here's the link, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22228&PoetID=18720 Drop by and leave a smile. Hugs ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 4:54 AM
Thanks for your applause and kindness Linda! :-) I'll sure pass by! :-)
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