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In Search of Nature

Wandering past the boundaries of his small reservation, Crescent Moon saw the land of his ancestors’ generation. Tales handed down spoke of vast plains where buffalo used to roam, but plains had become cities, animals had found a new home. Most of the creatures had been captured, tagged and placed into zoos; Anger coursed through Crescent Moon’s veins as tears from his eyes did ooze. Tribal leaders had told him that the sky was once a bright blue, but now smog was so thick that only faint rays of sun pierced through. Seeing mountains in the distance, he pursued a vision quest taking him through streets that were once the great forests of the West. Snowy peaks he finally reached, but they were lined by ski resorts. Fire burned in him, knowing beauty had been sacrificed for sports. As he climbed over peaks to view a river flowing below, he saw only tainted waters that caused his anger to grow. Sadly, slowly, he made his way back to the reservation, knowing there was no way to reverse what the white man had done. Although others had adjusted to life in captivity, he’d no longer participate in tribal festivity. Instead he made his home in a cave behind a waterfall, to envision his land as it once was, not a shopping mall. *Entry for Francine’s “A Nature Tale” contest. By Carolyn Devonshire, September 30, 2011

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Date: 10/24/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "A Nature Tale" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 12:31:00 AM
Isn't it sad, Carolyn, that this is a fairy tale? I think I know how passionate you are about the environment...this is a beautiful example of what it once was....I think you could have kept writing forever about how man has fouled things up..The more we advance, the farther we are from nature's perfection. Congrats on this amazing poem. ...I'm hoarding it in my favs.....I think u are in that treasure chest the most. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/22/2011 2:26:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. cory
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Date: 10/21/2011 11:03:00 PM
it must have been a beautiful home Carolyn. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 10/21/2011 10:53:00 PM
congrats on your third place win Carolyn, wonderful nature "story"
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:14:00 PM
Beautiful piece, my friend, with a very valid message
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:21:00 PM
It is so sad when all it boils down to is money. We have become an urban jungle. Here in Sask. in our southern part we have let herd of buffalo roam free again. Part of a plan to see how they would thrive and they are. Love your poem. phyl
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:02:00 PM
Excellent write, Carolyn! Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 9/30/2011 5:12:00 PM
An accurate write on the plundering of Gods gifts to mankind Carolyn..best of results in the coming contest of Francine..
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Date: 9/30/2011 4:21:00 PM
love stories like this. capitalism has a lot to answer for. good job
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:21:00 PM
love it!! Great little story you tell. good luck in the contest cory
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:06:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Very creative work..I think about what it might have been like years ago when the first peoples from Europe came to America...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:03:00 PM
So, true carolyn, but I'm afraid the bottom line will always be the almighty dollar.
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