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In Search of a Rainbow

At the end of a rainbow
Or so magic lore says,
One finds a pot
Black, ugly and fat
But filled with gold.
 
Would it not solve my wishes?
Would it not bring me fame?
Is it not worth the trouble 
Of following a lonely trail 
That leads to no place
Known in this world, 
But only marked 
With the rainbow's end?
 
Up rocky hills, 
Down green lush vales,
Listening intently
To the delicious songs 
Of gay bluebirds,
Or the harsh chatter 
Of the crested jays,
Defying stormy days 
Or blazing sunny days.
The flight from crowded
Crime infested cities?
Is it a prize in itself?
So I plod on,
Always in search 
Of the tail of the rainbow.
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George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Let us together set out along the trail of a rainbow looking for the pot of gold at its tip ! Will we reach the target... ? That's a question out of place ! The very journey after such a quest is rewarding....! No doubt it is a prize in itself....You have made the whole description so alluring !
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Your winning poem pulls me into the journey in search of a rainbows end. Love the natural beauty in this poem!
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 10:55 AM
- Do not search for the unattainable ... rather enjoy how beautiful it is, Victor :) - A beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 7:46 AM
How nice to find the Rainbow's end, impossible of course. Lovey write...Delice
Y. Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:51 PM
WoW! Victor, I love rainbows and what they represent. Your well-written poem is filled with hope. Will a pot of a gold at the end of a rainbow change my life? I don't know, but it's nothing wrong with hoping it will. Well done- Alexis
Daniel Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Have hope, it is all yours, great imagination here, Victor:)
Nicole Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 7:25 PM
I have never searched for gold at the end of the rainbow. I do enjoy gazing from afar at its beauty, which only lasts for a short time. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Seeker Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:18 AM
… what I searched for in the wilderness … I finally found within
Jayasankar Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 11:57 PM
Your verse so exquisite in expressing your imagination on following a lonely trail that leads to nowhere but the tail of a rainbow...where you find some peace of mind... far from the crowded cities...and as always BEAUTIFUL imagery Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 11:08 PM
To find that end of the colorful rainbow and find what we are looking for. A wonderful journey to your verse.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:49 PM
If only we could find that pot of gold, but then perhaps we already have, love and happiness is worth more than gold, so I’ve been told… Hugs Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 10:06 AM
It’s in the searching, my friend!
Buehler Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Magic, mystery and delightful fantasy enhances the lines of this beautiful verse. This is a fave for me. :=)
Gilmour Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 8:46 AM
I love rainbows and to search for the end is rather appealing Victor. Enjoyed reading your poetry very much and your picture is beautiful too ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Adams Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 7:48 AM
i have always loved rainbows and wondered what was at the end, perhaps we already have the treasures if we know where to look... beautiful words Victor, your thoughts seemed deep in this one! hugs
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey with you, Victor, to no place known but marked with the end of rainbow. That is a superb line of poetry. Plod on in search of the rainbow! Beautifully spun. Into my FAVES.
Ball Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Ah maybe you have found the end of the rainbow. Down lush green vales listening intently to the birds song. The fight from crowded crime infested city life. Indeed a prize in itself. Build a house and stay there. I would. Great job here with lovely imagery. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 12:09 AM
I think many of us look for that rainbow in life, sometimes we're lucky and find it but more often than not it seems to move frkm us. Tom
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