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In Search of a Poem-Win

A 
Poem 
Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my
Heart.

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4th place win
Contest: Under 10 by Skat-Love
Dr. Ram Mehta

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/9/2013 10:44:00 PM congratulations Dr Ram.... xox~ LINDA Login to Reply

Fatima Nusairat Date: 11/9/2013 5:31:00 PM Congratulation..very nice poem Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 11/9/2013 12:30:00 PM A stunning poem. Congrats on the win :) Login to Reply

Mario De Paz Date: 11/9/2013 9:43:00 AM Your few verses are impressing. You deserve a better place than mine Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 11/9/2013 9:30:00 AM congratulations on your win friend Ram ;) cheers!! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/8/2013 8:50:00 PM sensual imagery Dr., CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 11/10/2011 9:13:00 PM wow! the part 'breath in her mouth' is... profound! Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 11/10/2011 7:40:00 PM Really interested in the way you interact with the poetry in this piece Dr Ram, & love the way it is presented:) Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 11/9/2011 7:16:00 AM Great write Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read!---Lori Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 11/9/2011 1:19:00 AM Stellar Dr! Immensely Supah Poet Tree Soupin' GOOD! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 11/8/2011 11:44:00 PM Very nice, Dr. Ram. Kim Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 11/8/2011 11:20:00 PM Neatly done... stirring awake the treasure within...good job Dr ram...Margaret Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/8/2011 10:00:00 PM This is very nicely done, Dr. Ram! And thanks for my placement in your contest. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/8/2011 9:12:00 PM This is another new form for me, Doc. I believe poems make your mind come alive....and....since u have been writing for sooooo many years, u must have a very busy mind! This poem that sleeps in u also sleeps within me. Thanks for the placement in your quinzaine contest...fun stuff those quinzaines are! They actually sound like a fancy French pastry! mmm. Take care. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 11/8/2011 7:59:00 PM dig the gentleness, nice one Dr Ram Mehta~N Login to Reply