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IN RESPONSE TO MY FIRST POEM - Knotty Sendoff

MY LOST ROMEO

You're my only love
And I call you my love
You are my Romeo
And my inamorato

I feel so captivated
To be loved by you
All I ever wanted
Was to be with you

And finally will you marry me
You asked me
Yes I will marry you
And live my lifetime with you

I gave you wholly
I loved you unconditionally
I gave you totally
I loved you solely

Everything happened so fast
Present turned into past
It was not meant to last
It just needed to past

You became cold it was rust not gold
Beautiful memoirs turned spoiled as mold
Not even our friendship was saved
You just turned your back and faded

Tears left falling
Never heard my heart's aching
Leaving without talking
Your heart's not beating

Into the bliss fading 
Into the dark not worth remembering
Goodbye to you my Romeo
And my inamorato

August 23, 2015


"IN RESPONSE TO MY FIRST POEM"

Till we meet again
I said to ease the pain
To someone who turned his back
Who shall never come back

Pain can last
But time should pass
This feeling must end
But up to what extent

Till we meet again 
When will I see you again
My Heart aches deeply
My Heart breaks softly

Gone are the days
Of the coffee for two
Will surely miss those days
At the cinema too

The smiles on your face
The sweet words from your lips
Like the sun that rises
As crisp as your kisses

Till we meet again
see you again
I will wait for that day
As long as the sun has its ray

@Copyright Meline C. Ngo September 28, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/2/2015 1:00:00 AM
Meline, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Skat.
Date: 10/1/2015 4:20:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:21:00 AM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 10/1/2015 8:32:00 AM
A deeply emotional write, congrats on your win.
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/11/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 10/1/2015 1:59:00 AM
Wonderful both poems Meline n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/30/2015 9:58:00 PM
BOTH BEAUTIFUL WRITES EXPRESSED A POET WRITING OF DEEP EMOTIONS. Congrats on your win!
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:28:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, it is coming from personal experience and emotion maybe it's what made it so special.
Date: 9/30/2015 4:48:00 PM
oh the response is so beautiful so so full of longing - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Jan, it is written from the heart indeed. I wrote the "my lost Romeo" right after I lost the man I truly love. Thanks again.