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In Response To My First Poem - Knotty Sendoff

MY LOST ROMEO You're my only love And I call you my love You are my Romeo And my inamorato I feel so captivated To be loved by you All I ever wanted Was to be with you And finally will you marry me You asked me Yes I will marry you And live my lifetime with you I gave you wholly I loved you unconditionally I gave you totally I loved you solely Everything happened so fast Present turned into past It was not meant to last It just needed to past You became cold it was rust not gold Beautiful memoirs turned spoiled as mold Not even our friendship was saved You just turned your back and faded Tears left falling Never heard my heart's aching Leaving without talking Your heart's not beating Into the bliss fading Into the dark not worth remembering Goodbye to you my Romeo And my inamorato August 23, 2015 "IN RESPONSE TO MY FIRST POEM" Till we meet again I said to ease the pain To someone who turned his back Who shall never come back Pain can last But time should pass This feeling must end But up to what extent Till we meet again When will I see you again My Heart aches deeply My Heart breaks softly Gone are the days Of the coffee for two Will surely miss those days At the cinema too The smiles on your face The sweet words from your lips Like the sun that rises As crisp as your kisses Till we meet again see you again I will wait for that day As long as the sun has its ray @Copyright Meline C. Ngo September 28, 2015

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Date: 10/2/2015 1:00:00 AM
Meline, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Skat.
Date: 10/1/2015 4:20:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:21:00 AM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 10/1/2015 8:32:00 AM
A deeply emotional write, congrats on your win.
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/11/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 10/1/2015 1:59:00 AM
Wonderful both poems Meline n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/30/2015 9:58:00 PM
BOTH BEAUTIFUL WRITES EXPRESSED A POET WRITING OF DEEP EMOTIONS. Congrats on your win!
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:28:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, it is coming from personal experience and emotion maybe it's what made it so special.
Date: 9/30/2015 4:48:00 PM
oh the response is so beautiful so so full of longing - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Meline Ngo
Date: 10/3/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Jan, it is written from the heart indeed. I wrote the "my lost Romeo" right after I lost the man I truly love. Thanks again.

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