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In Response To If

Beware, my friend, of Kipling's thoughts on "man". He claims to know just how and what it takes, And even expounds on a fool proof plan - Which instead of a man, a fool he makes. I absorbed his poem and was thrilled to try To prove my manhood to all who would doubt. Over again I read the reasons why I would be considered a man throughout. I am a taker of shortcuts, it's true. I skipped to the part on risking it all, And bet on a horse whose rider he threw. I am a pauper with that jockey's fall. Kipling did not talk of starting again Standing in just his underwear like me. My wife took the car and didn't say when She'd return - she just said "IF" don't you see. 10-8-18 Silent One's contest In Response To If

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Date: 11/26/2018 12:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Larry, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/25/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/25/2018 11:32:00 AM
I love it Larry, congratulations...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/25/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Nice to hear from you!!
Date: 11/25/2018 10:43:00 AM
Nice one Larry.. Interesting thoughts.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/25/2018 10:33:00 PM
Thank you! Always nice to place in your contests!!
Date: 10/24/2018 10:37:00 PM
Oh, this is great. I love that you treated your response in a "not so solemn" manner. Well done. Best wishes. Deb
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2018 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 10/8/2018 10:33:00 PM
LOL - a beauty, Larry. Love your humor. Beautiful take on the challenge.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/8/2018 10:36:00 PM
Thanks, Line. Always encouraging to hear from you!

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