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09/25/23

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Third Place
Contest by Eve Roper.

IN RAINS With umbrella walking to school in rains ! Tried to hurry up but all went in vain. Motion was slow : A boy rushed and ventured for sheltering umbrella and entered. It was not that I felt no compassion ! Got embarrassed : He took no permission. Instead walked all along with easy steps. May be, from showers wanted to escape. I won’t mind at all, if a little bit, he might have acted being polite ! Pic. 2

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Date: 9/24/2023 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anisha. Many blessings to you
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