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In Praise of Yelling

Sometimes
it's good to give 
yourself up in an heartfelt yell -
to find a place out of earshot
of others, a beach will do, 
or better, a shoreline with rocks
and crashing waves,
or out bush where there is
nothing but wide open spaces -
and then take a deep breath
to fuel your loudest yell.

At first it will feel strange
to hear your own voice
rise unrestrained in air, 
savage, primal, a sound coming
from the deepest pit
of your ancestral soul.
Keep yelling until you feel
the need subside 
and a calm comes upon you.

You will leave satisfied,
still without answers and weighted
with all the problems
that you carried before. 
There will be no sudden
enlightenment or beatific vision,
just a soulful peace purged 
of all anger, only yourself, 
stripped of pretense
and once more a reconciled
and humble child of earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/3/2024 6:10:00 AM
Ah, the PRIMAL SCREAM......I call it chanting and wonder what the neighbors think
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/4/2024 5:41:00 AM
I wonder about the neighbours but hope they have their hearing aids turned off. Thanks John for getting in earshot of tfe poem....very much appreciated my friend.
Date: 5/3/2024 5:12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever reached the point where I wanted to give a blood curdling scream about anything. Not sure if that's a good thing or not. I'm more of a "seether" who huffs and puffs, trying to blow down the person or problem that causes me angst. Maybe because I've never lived in an open enough space not to be heard. I write my screams in poetic verse. Your poetry always gives me food for thought, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/4/2024 5:33:00 AM
Would stop short of a scream...a yell is less threatening. Probably more of a need to access the undiluted which has the potential to become harmful. Many thanks dear Lin, as always a treasured guest in the little world of my poetry...providing thoughtful commentary.

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