In Praise of Lovely Homes

Relaxing on the porch as darkness fell,
I sipped iced tea, reflecting on my day.
There was breathtaking beauty all around,
the perfect lawn, a pleasure to survey.

I'd had a scrumptious meal with fine red wine
and watched a Lifetime romance on TV.
I'd waltzed around the den as CD's played
the tunes I love the best by Kenny G.

Then came my thirty-minute bubble bath,
so warm and soothing. While still damp, I lay,
just briefly, on the comfy bed. I dressed
and used a lightly-scented body spray.

That's when I got the tea and came outside
to relish what would be the best of nights.
Euphoria was at a height--AND THEN
IT STOPPED! I saw two brightly glaring lights.

The Johnsons, owners of the house, were back
two days before they were supposed to be!
I tossed the tea glass in a well-pruned shrub
and fled before they got a glimpse of me.

The Blakes' weeklong vacation will begin
tomorrow. Like the Johnsons, they will hide
their house key in a fake rock near the door.
Man, I can hardly wait to get inside!


John Lawless's And Then it Stopped Contest,
placed third of eight July 2017

August 3, 2017, entered in Brian Strand's August Standard Contest

January 18, 2021
entered in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (44) Contest
   Placed 5th

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Date: 7/13/2017 7:49:00 PM
Glad that at least yours was a winner. It was one of my very favorites, Janice. Congratulations.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/13/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! My NA's have really been piling up lately! It was encouraging to see this one place high. Janice
Date: 7/9/2017 6:34:00 AM
Back to say congratulations Janice. This was my winner:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. Janice
Date: 7/8/2017 3:28:00 PM
hehe, I didn't see that coming! Loved it! Congratulations on a well deserved win. - Dean
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dean! Janice
Date: 7/8/2017 10:26:00 AM
Congrats Janice to win on this nice piece. Hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anisha! Janice
Date: 7/8/2017 8:42:00 AM
Oh, Janice, you're such a clever lady!... Well done with this write, and let me know when they go on vacation so I can go along with you.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2017 8:44:00 AM
Hey, Lin, I'm so glad you liked it! I'll let you know! Janice
Date: 7/8/2017 8:22:00 AM
Very good, nicely done, caught me by surprise with the twist at the end, like Andrea said very clever
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2017 8:42:00 AM
Frederic, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/8/2017 7:56:00 AM
Janice....had me laughing my ass off as I read the final two stanza....a nicely laid poetic trap.....sprung....Thanks for participating in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2017 8:42:00 AM
John, I'm so glad you got a kick out of it. Thanks so much for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem! Janice
Date: 7/6/2017 12:00:00 PM
OH MY, this is amazingly good work, Janice. VERY clever and creative! FAVE!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/6/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, Andrea! Janice
Date: 7/3/2017 7:56:00 PM
LOL ... this is charming and naughty, and I enjoyed it very much! All that unused space - seems such a waste! Very imaginative write, Janice! ;-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/3/2017 8:29:00 PM
Right! Nice homes should be loved and appreciated. LOL! Thanks, Greg! Janice
Date: 7/2/2017 2:06:00 PM
You better be careful. lol A B and E will get you a hard nickel. You really had me going there for a minute, Janice. Shame on you. lol This is very funny!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/2/2017 3:11:00 PM
Danny, I'm truly glad you got a kick out of it! Janice
Date: 7/2/2017 8:59:00 AM
You naughty girl. But I LOVE iced tea(I drink it by the gallon), so it really brought your poem up close.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/2/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thanks, Dale! Janice
Date: 7/2/2017 8:06:00 AM
ohh, sneaky you.. so fine, janice; you made me smile!..huggs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/2/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Janice
Date: 7/2/2017 2:02:00 AM
SO well done and funny, Janice! Best of luck to you
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/2/2017 7:13:00 AM
Glad you liked it, White Wolf. Thanks! Janice
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