In Praise of Lovely Homes

Relaxing on the porch as darkness fell,
I sipped iced tea, reflecting on my day.
There was breathtaking beauty all around,
the perfect lawn, a pleasure to survey.

I'd had a scrumptious meal with fine red wine
and watched a Lifetime romance on TV.
I'd waltzed around the den as CD's played
the tunes I love the best by Kenny G.

Then came my thirty-minute bubble bath,
so warm and soothing. While still damp, I lay,
just briefly, on the comfy bed. I dressed
and used a lightly-scented body spray.

That's when I got the tea and came outside
to relish what would be the best of nights.
Euphoria was at a height--AND THEN
IT STOPPED! I saw two brightly glaring lights.

The Johnsons, owners of the house, were back
two days before they were supposed to be!
I tossed the tea glass in a well-pruned shrub
and fled before they got a glimpse of me.

The Blakes' weeklong vacation will begin
tomorrow. Like the Johnsons, they will hide
their house key in a fake rock near the door.
Man, I can hardly wait to get inside!


John Lawless's And Then it Stopped Contest,
placed third of eight July 2017

August 3, 2017, entered in Brian Strand's August Standard Contest

January 18, 2021
entered in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (44) Contest
   Placed 5th
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Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Glad that at least yours was a winner. It was one of my very favorites, Janice. Congratulations.
Canerdy Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! My NA's have really been piling up lately! It was encouraging to see this one place high. Janice
Turner Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Back to say congratulations Janice. This was my winner:)
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. Janice
Wood Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 3:28 PM
hehe, I didn't see that coming! Loved it! Congratulations on a well deserved win. - Dean
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Thanks so much, Dean! Janice
Dutta Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Congrats Janice to win on this nice piece. Hugs
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Thanks so much, Anisha! Janice
Lane Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Oh, Janice, you're such a clever lady!... Well done with this write, and let me know when they go on vacation so I can go along with you.
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Hey, Lin, I'm so glad you liked it! I'll let you know! Janice
Parker Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Very good, nicely done, caught me by surprise with the twist at the end, like Andrea said very clever
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Frederic, thank you so much! Janice
Lawless Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Janice....had me laughing my ass off as I read the final two stanza....a nicely laid poetic trap.....sprung....Thanks for participating in the contest
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:42 AM
John, I'm so glad you got a kick out of it. Thanks so much for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 12:00 PM
OH MY, this is amazingly good work, Janice. VERY clever and creative! FAVE!!!
Canerdy Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Thank you SO MUCH, Andrea! Janice
Barden Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 7:56 PM
LOL ... this is charming and naughty, and I enjoyed it very much! All that unused space - seems such a waste! Very imaginative write, Janice! ;-)
Canerdy Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Right! Nice homes should be loved and appreciated. LOL! Thanks, Greg! Janice
Turner Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:06 PM
You better be careful. lol A B and E will get you a hard nickel. You really had me going there for a minute, Janice. Shame on you. lol This is very funny!!!
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Danny, I'm truly glad you got a kick out of it! Janice
Cozart Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 8:59 AM
You naughty girl. But I LOVE iced tea(I drink it by the gallon), so it really brought your poem up close.
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thanks, Dale! Janice
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 8:06 AM
ohh, sneaky you.. so fine, janice; you made me smile!..huggs
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Janice
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:02 AM
SO well done and funny, Janice! Best of luck to you
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Glad you liked it, White Wolf. Thanks! Janice
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