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In Praise of Endings

If this was the last war I'd see purged the shadow bombs that press us from sleep I'd no longer view sky high places that bleed red to the clouds but celebrate a rejuvenated land free from the spray of guns I'd hear church bells careening with the swell of promise the pull of new movement gleaming like the dissolution of sorrow I'd hear laughter broad, like peacocks preening and hallelujahs from the lips of orators I'd invade streets smeared with the joy of dancing I'd no longer weep at new war graves with poppies on crosses I'd see the sacred cord that binds soldiers to their mothers restored I'd throw to a meadow sunflower seeds to grow a Van Gogh I'd take a hay wagon ride with my lover to debate love's curvy options with compassion now a measure of value for the end of war is like dreams on high volume that mark the preservation of life in its most vital form beyond the reach of forgetting

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Date: 9/25/2023 4:28:00 PM
Your poem captures the wounded hearts in war...some physically broken others mentally broke. To live in a world without guns and the need for war...that would be wonderful. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/25/2023 4:33:00 PM
Thanks very much, Sara, for your strong voice of encouragement. It seems humankind learns little from the mass casualties + destruction war engenders. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 9/22/2023 3:23:00 PM
Encouraging words to those that have been to war, Brian. You're very sensitive to the needs of those broken through war and the comforting that will soothe their souls. The last war will bring victory to those that value Love instead of hate. Have a great week! Bill
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/22/2023 4:25:00 PM
Thanks very much for your supportive words Bill. I have Ukrainian grandparents on my mother's side, so naturally we all follow the war quite closely. May it end soon. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 9/18/2023 6:28:00 PM
Oh, what a lovely place it would be if this was the last war. A powerful poem Brian.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/18/2023 6:35:00 PM
Greetings Jerry, I appreciate the vote of confidence as the poem received a recent contest NA. Rather than delete the piece I decided to let it stand. Many thanks for your message. Brian
Date: 9/17/2023 10:54:00 PM
Powerful and very beautiful Brian! The sentence “ I'd see the sacred cord that binds soldiers to their mothers restored“ really grabbed me! Just lovely….Debx
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/18/2023 6:28:00 AM
Greetings Deb, Thank you for your stop by and encouraging appraisal. I am glad to know the posting had resonance for you. Be well. Brian

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