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painting: The Penitent Peter by El Greco In penitence I kneel before your throne, head bowed with shame, heart weighed down with sin, my sobbing whispers heard only by God recounting the ways I, like a sheep, have gone astray. When I keep silent, my bones waste away but when I acknowledge my sin to you, you forgive my guilt. You are my hiding place, you surround me with songs of deliverance. Soften my heart and give me ears to hear and eyes to see your goodness and mercy. He who seeks the Lord will surely find - in uncluttered silence God draws near, the Holy Spirit brings to mind these words: “He saved us, not because of deeds we’ve done, in mercy we are justified by grace” “If we confess our sins he is faithful and just and will forgive us and cleanse us from all unrighteousness.” Let us rejoice and be glad and give him glory, surely you took our infirmities and carried our sorrows, by your stripes we are healed; those who sow in tears now reap in joy! Written July 2020

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Date: 1/30/2022 1:28:00 PM
John, Your poem was sincere and warm. I enjoyed it. I believe we should all share in this cup as we are family in the body of Christ. Congratulations on your victorious win. Blessings~ Debra.
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Date: 1/30/2022 9:35:00 AM
John, dear friend, this poem sings with your faith and faithfulness. In your words I hear so many songs especially one of my favorites "You are my hiding place" and Ps. 126. Beautifully written poem of faith and comfort! Congratulations on your win! What a wonderful way to wake up on Sunday with your words to start the day! Twenty-nine days to spring training! Time to dust off the glove and find those baseballs!
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Date: 1/30/2022 8:39:00 AM
It's a blessing on this Sunday afternoon to be reminded of this undeserved grace, John in your reverently penned, beautiful poem. I haven't been writing much new poetry at all over the past year but still enjoy 'dipping in' now and again. Best wishes and congratulations Wendy
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Date: 1/30/2022 7:37:00 AM
Very beautiful spiritual writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/30/2022 4:50:00 AM
I love this. Brilliant write. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina and CONGRATS on your win
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Date: 1/30/2022 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Gina for the contest and the generous placement. Looking forward to reading all your selections. God bless ~ John

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