In Orbit
IN ORBIT
innocent impressions
a troubled talent
so prolific
in
dedicated presentations
stunning
sensuous
eyes hiding
a shared intimacy
an imagined intensity
candlelit
a turn of events
a focus wondered
intense expectations
proposed
consumed
affecting imagination
so poignant
this
impotency
thwarted
& eluded
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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