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In Night Quiet Pull

Written: September 22, 2024, Glenn Hughes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori: Inspired by Gettin’ Tighter Song ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When the night descends, And I find myself so far away, Ten thousand miles stretch between us, In the silence, I long to stay. Let pass of your cares, As the band sways and plays, In a rhythm that draws you near, Lose yourself in the sound, And let the music take you away. Rise and shine, stay in your place As the moments weave and bind, A grip grows firm, a subtle sign, In the dance of time, we find, A closeness that we can't unwind. As moments weave and intertwine, In whispers soft, you claim you're well The grip of time grows ever fine. Release the burdens that weigh you down This spot feels just so bright In shadows deep, a quest unfolds, The atmosphere is just right. The hours stretch on, a shadowed plight Round and round, you twirl and sway Finding it tough to find your way In the dance of time, all it takes is grace In the gentle dawn of effort's embrace, You'll discover ease, a tranquil space, Once you take the step, the path will unfold, A journey of grace, in stories untold. Rise and shine, stay aligned As the grip draws ever near, Moments slip, yet still we steer. In the dance of fate's design, Pressure mounts, yet we align. Drawing close, a gentle squeeze Drawing close a gente bind Drawing close a gente bind.

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Date: 10/10/2024 7:30:00 PM
‘ Once you take the step, the path will unfold, A journey of grace, in stories untold’… you weave your words so well. Fantastic poetry. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 9/27/2024 6:12:00 PM
Lovely lyrics...:) You haven't been posting as much- it's good to see some works from you.
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Date: 9/25/2024 8:12:00 AM
Nice lyric Soto, with a rhythmic flow but best of all is the metaphors that are implied. Maria
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Date: 9/24/2024 12:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your story/write. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day as you go writing away...............
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Date: 9/23/2024 8:21:00 AM
I’m charmed with the lines : Rise and shine, stay in your place.. A closeness that we can’t unwind.. Moments slip, yet still we steer.. Have Good Days.
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Date: 9/23/2024 5:38:00 AM
Brilliant poem even taken on its own without comparing it to Glenn Hughes poetry. You did well. Best for a win.
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