In My Shoes

With these shoes Cross that river With a paddle

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/29/2020 7:08:00 AM

Wonderful Senryu! Thank you for this read JC Hawkens

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2013 2:51:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle here, my friend - we say shoes like boats over here for large shoes

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2010 11:47:00 AM

Hummmm___Does that mean you are wearing boats? Interesting Senryu...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/19/2010 7:46:00 AM

Great Senryu and thank you for sharing it with us on PS, Audrey! Saw a number of butterflies today and at least it is getting warm now. Thank you for your kind comments....Love, Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2010 2:59:00 AM

Hi, Audrey, it is sure is fun seeing all the different shoe poems here!! thanks for your comment to me today. luv, andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/17/2010 11:47:00 PM

Audrey,Exceptional Senryu...:) Charma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2010 8:39:00 PM

A fine senryu. Good lick in the contest