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Rispetto
The rispetto lyric is generally composed of (two quatrains), eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. Early on the rhyme scheme was usually abababcc , but ababccdd is now more prominent.

In my bubble, I’m deprived of human touch, unable to express my love through my hands. I no longer hug the one’s I love so much and I only hope my grandson understands. Within my sterile bubble, time moves so slow, when asked how I am, I answer, I don’t know. For I’m feeling isolated and alone, and oft cry, talking to people on the phone. From my balcony, I watched my city die, its parking lots empty as cemeteries. And when demand for masks overwhelmed supply folks started treating friends as adversaries. The hearts of some partiers got hardened by time, and they stopped wearing masks, although it’s a crime. But today’s news says vaccines are on the way, and so I wrote a poem, to mark this day! (Double Rispetto) 10-15-2020

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Date: 10/15/2020 8:24:00 PM
I feel sure this moving poem expresses the feelings so many have, Emile! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/16/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/15/2020 6:06:00 PM
This is really beautiful, Emile with its very sad tone. Thanks so much for my win in your contest!
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Date: 10/15/2020 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/15/2020 1:47:00 PM
a wonderful take on the contest, john, and a beautifully written poem. hope your efforts get you high on the list of winners...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/15/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thanks Ilene, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/15/2020 11:07:00 AM
Let's hope it is soon. Amazing how something we can not see can do so much damage and cause such grief and heartache. Wonderful writing, Emile...and congratulations on becoming a premium member. ~ Elaine
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/15/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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