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In my brokenness, gripped by angst of futility when unfinished goals reign midst schedule’s certainty I cry to God for His guiding authority dispelling despair and anxiety… His help enables me move on toward victorious serenity. Despite my brokenness, leaving me feel belittled frustrated by weakness’ failure, sorely embattled I seek the Saviour Who keeps my heart safely handled… His wisdom directs me against being rattled so by His grace, I start anew, peacefully settled. Overcoming brokenness, midst missing mark of excellence though striving for righteousness, trusting supreme Providence I’m sanctified by His forgiveness of divine iridescence putting to shame my selfish intents of vain influence His standards propel me toward noble persistence. Healed from brokenness*, grateful that from guilt I’m freed to Christ, I cleave, fulfilling my roles with His approval indeed persevering for dreams’ fruition along time to heed fighting slothfulness and unproductiveness-breed triumphing through His strength I constantly need. Prevailing over brokenness, realizing tenacious pride’s height I’m humbled by the Lord for insisting self-will’s might being adamant in challenging His perfect timing so right in the guise of doing my utmost best with commitment-light… now, with servant’s spirit, I yield to Him with faith’s delight.
*Psalm 34:18 The LORD is nigh unto them that are of a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit. Psalm147:3 He healeth the broken in heart, and bindeth up their wounds. June 30, 2021 2nd place, "A broken person" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Faraz Ajmal; judged on 7/24/2021.

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Date: 7/29/2021 3:58:00 PM
It is ironic that I came by this poem today. I needed it. I'm going to find these psalms in my bible. I love the psalms. I shall copy this to put in my table drawer next to my bed. God Bless. Marikate
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Date: 7/25/2021 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What an amazing story/write. Wonderful. I love your last line, "now, with servant’s spirit, I yield to Him with faith’s delight." Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 7/24/2021 11:15:00 PM
Spiritual depth. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 6/30/2021 11:12:00 AM
Hello Beata, Thanks for reading my poem. This is such a gripping write about broken feelings and how to get over them, find the strength to overcome them with the help of the Lord.. Nag publish ka na ba ng book of poems - I see you have written a lot already. It is so good to find a kababayan here.
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