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In Memory of Pocket Knives

On those long days when it was too hot to ride or run, a boy would find an island of cool beneath a tree and sit there with his pocket knife to whittle away time and a piece of wood. A good blade could shape the hull of a model boat or thinly peel an apple or carve a name clean into the smooth bark of a spotted gum. There was a world to make with a pocket knife, mine a pearl handled beauty with two folding blades, short and long. It was beyond the mind to think it a weapon, only a treasured possession of pure utility, a tool for hands to bring forth a creation or to cut free a form from its binding. Finally, years saw its blades become blunt and spend less time in my pocket, more languishing at the bottom of a drawer. It's still preserved with a nostalgic reverence. Nowadays, whittling has become a lost art for boys, pocket knives tarnished by a new age and drafted for duty in the service of fear. On those long days when it is too hot to do anything much, hands still crave to carve things that substitute for a piece of wood, twitching away in the cramped solitude of an air-conditioned self.

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Date: 3/14/2024 4:01:00 PM
I enjoyed the nostalgic nature of your poem as you reflected upon your prized pocketknife. Sadly, what was once a prized treasure is now used as a weapon of fire...well said. Sounds strange, but I had a pocketknife. I grew up with all boys so getting my own at the age of 12 was normal to me. I sat on the porch with my dad learning to whittle and listening to him whistle. I don't know whatever happened to my 'pearl' pocketknife. I didn't take it with me to college. Now I'm curious. Enjoyed!
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:34:00 PM
I wondered whether the poem would find enough fellow travellers...delighted that you identified with the theme...and you had a pocket knife !. Thanyou for sharing your thoughts dear Sara...hope you end up finding the treasure. Take care...
Date: 3/14/2024 3:21:00 PM
Great poem, really takes me back. My old pocket knife is in a the kitchen drawer, time for a good sharpening. John
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:27:00 PM
So good to hear from you John...missed you. Many thanks for taking the trip into the nostalgia of the pocket knife... Keep safe... regards, Paul
Date: 3/14/2024 2:32:00 PM
Dear Paul, your poem beautifully captures the nostalgic essence of a bygone era where simple pleasures like whittling were cherished. The imagery of a boy finding peace and creativity in the shade of a tree with his pocket knife is evocative and touching. I love your portrayal of the pocket knife as a tool of utility and creation rather than a weapon is poignant, highlighting the shift in societal perceptions over time. I feel a real sense of longing for the innocence and simplicity of childhood pursuits. This is a heartfelt reflection, Paul. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:21:00 PM
Your comments Daniel give voice to a thorough exploration of the themes in the poem...brilliantly done. My sincere thanks for giving it such attention...do indeed appreciate your support.
Date: 3/14/2024 11:19:00 AM
I was immediately transported into your world Paul. I'm old enough that the kinds of things you talk about were still lingering in my childhood too as Grandparents would talk to me about things. I did have a pocket knife, nothing decent but I sharpened pencils and later the occasional eye liner, scratched my name in the bark of a tree (which Google Earth showed me was still in my Grandparents old garden until relatively recently). I loved the art tying knots too but never got particularly good
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:11:00 PM
There we go...such a poem about antiquity connecting to yr generation ( at least to you )...a buzz for me. The influence of your grandparents obviously planted many memories. Pleased that the poem struck a sympathetic note dear DD. Thankyou
Date: 3/14/2024 5:28:00 AM
When I read this I thought of the Andy Griffith show. Simpler times and kids found interesting ways to entertain themselves. Now it's all TV and video games. Never was a pocket knife kid but Ioved to ride my bike and spend time in the wood
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/14/2024 10:03:00 PM
Thanks Tom for yr comments. Such a poem no doubt condems me to the sin of overemphasising the virtues of the 50's...rose colored glasses etc. However meaning and a sense of connection were more evident. Regards.

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