In Memory of Pocket Knives

On those long days
when it was too hot to ride
or run, a boy would find
an island of cool beneath
a tree and sit there 
with his pocket knife
to whittle away time
and a piece of wood.
A good blade could shape 
the hull of a model boat
or thinly peel an apple
or carve a name clean
into the smooth bark 
of a spotted gum.

There was a world to make
with a pocket knife,
mine a pearl handled beauty
with two folding blades, 
short and long.
It was beyond the mind
to think it a weapon, only
a treasured possession 
of pure utility, a tool
for hands to bring forth
a creation or to cut free 
a form from its binding.

Finally, 
years saw its blades become
blunt and spend less time 
in my pocket, more languishing 
at the bottom of a drawer.
It's still preserved with
a nostalgic reverence.
Nowadays, whittling
has become a lost art for boys,
pocket knives tarnished
by a new age and drafted
for duty in the service
of fear. On those long days
when it is too hot
to do anything much,
hands still crave to carve 
things that substitute
for a piece of wood, 
twitching away 
in the cramped solitude 
of an air-conditioned self.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Summers Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Great poem, really takes me back. My old pocket knife is in a the kitchen drawer, time for a good sharpening. John
Willason Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 10:27 PM
So good to hear from you John...missed you. Many thanks for taking the trip into the nostalgia of the pocket knife... Keep safe... regards, Paul
Rodgers Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:32 PM
Dear Paul, your poem beautifully captures the nostalgic essence of a bygone era where simple pleasures like whittling were cherished. The imagery of a boy finding peace and creativity in the shade of a tree with his pocket knife is evocative and touching. I love your portrayal of the pocket knife as a tool of utility and creation rather than a weapon is poignant, highlighting the shift in societal perceptions over time. I feel a real sense of longing for the innocence and simplicity of childhood pursuits. This is a heartfelt reflection, Paul. - Blessings, Daniel
Willason Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 10:21 PM
Your comments Daniel give voice to a thorough exploration of the themes in the poem...brilliantly done. My sincere thanks for giving it such attention...do indeed appreciate your support.
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