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In Loving Ways

I walk on soft cushion, moss under my feet Hoping for your soft gestures to meet October air is suddenly cold Leading me to feel sort of bold Ready to face winter’s harsh cold, as it stays While watching snow filled days - In loving ways - Heidi Sands 10/6/19 Placed 3rd in the October Contest 45 or less Words Contest.

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Date: 10/24/2019 11:17:00 AM
We have lots of moss in our backyard! In loving ways, sweet! Congratulations!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Kim :) I appreciate your comment on this !
Date: 10/22/2019 9:02:00 PM
"...in loving ways" just seals the deal on this romantic poem, Heidi. Congrats on your win in Caren's contest! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/22/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon :)
Date: 10/21/2019 12:12:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Heidi. Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/21/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice :)
Date: 10/21/2019 11:40:00 AM
Great poem Heidi!…I could feel the cold as I read on. Congrats.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/21/2019 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 10/6/2019 5:25:00 PM
So much said in so few words..in honor of the changing season.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! :)
Date: 10/6/2019 4:51:00 PM
In Autumn's love...the best place to be... certainly time be bold... All the best
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 10/6/2019 1:27:00 PM
- A lovely poem :) - I prefer to go on soft moss cushions ... snow is so cold, Heidi - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :)

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