Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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In Love Forever

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It was with just a glance and we fell in love,
Our hearts touched and that was it;
I could literally hear the angels singing above,
Wondering, wishing, should I invite him to sit.

It had started an ordinary winter day,
I had gone for a walk, now I was penning a story;
Writing in my journal a poem, I was swept away,
I didn't know that I would find my own eternity.

It was a small café that I sat quietly writing,
He hesitated and sat and it was love at first sight;
Peaking at what I had penned, he was soon reading,
From that day, we were one, day and night.

He asked me to marry him on Valentines Day,
We planned and waited one blissful wonderful year;
On February 14, we married, that day will always stay,
It was God's will, he must go, now but an angel near.

Our love darling will never, ever grow cold,
Even when this girl is frail and wrinkled old. 

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January 28, 2016

Poetry/Rhyme/In Love Forever
Copyright Protected, ID 16-749-924-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Our Year In Love
Sponsor, Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Fourth Place

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Daniel Turner February 21, 2016 at 12:39 PM Very touching write, BW. Love lives in the heart even after...only to keep growing. Congratulations on your winning write. Peace my friend:) Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:14 PM Daniel, thanks for the congratulations and the lovely comment ~

Anisha Dutta February 21, 2016 at 9:40 AM Congrats B.O. to win on the wonderful poem. Love. Anisha D Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:15 PM Anisha, thanks for the congrats and the love ~

Beautiful Scars February 21, 2016 at 8:52 AM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest. Very romantically written..-luloo Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM Laura, thanks for the congrats and the compliment, appreciate !

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 8:10 AM Broken Wings, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~ Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM Linda, thanks so much for the visit and the congratulations !

Lin Lane February 21, 2016 at 7:43 AM This is so tenderly sweet, Constance. Congratulations on the placing. hugs. Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:17 PM Lin, thanks for the visit and the congratulations and the hugs !

Steve Grammatico February 21, 2016 at 4:47 AM Broken Wings, touching, beautiful and sad, all at the same time. Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:17 PM Steve, thanks for the nice comment, so grateful !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 21, 2016 at 2:40 AM ***My 4th place, thank you for sharing the magical moment, weeeee like you am all modest and demure to wait for the guy to make the first move.. =`) Wow Valentine's day!!! I felt love in every single stanza, the last two stanzas just a great finale!!!KUDOS!~Olive Eloisa Constance La France February 21, 2016 at 1:19 PM Olive, thank you for that great contest and for my placement, I am very honored ~

White Sage January 31, 2016 at 4:27 AM how sweet those words are, simply lovely, though sad but it shows one immortal love...the writing of a memory is always superb, and this is an example, excellent write BW, as always...best of luck in the contest Constance La France January 31, 2016 at 4:36 AM Sage, thanks for that lovely comment and the excellent !

Dineen Williams Gault January 30, 2016 at 4:02 PM Love can be so intense that, a moment in time can fill us for a lifetime. Painful, yet beautiful all at once. Constance La France January 30, 2016 at 6:15 PM Dineed, thank you for that lovely comment , appreciated ~

Eric Boddie January 30, 2016 at 9:14 AM to Truly Love, if only once....is to truly become a dunce....because for Love, we are all fools....because Love requires unconventional rules....like giving up my coat when it's freezing cold....or the willingness to destroy anything that threatens your Soul....Love is so simple to be so very complex....we lose every bit of ourselves because of how Love infects....your heart to forever bind to mine....that's the true Beauty of Love, it lasts through all time....Beautiful write bw....;) Constance La France January 30, 2016 at 9:25 AM Eric, thanks for the visit and your lovely poetic comment and for the beautiful ....;)

Thomas Martin January 29, 2016 at 10:37 AM Wow! For romantic poetry (as well as others) you are in a class by yourself! Constance La France January 29, 2016 at 2:33 PM Thomas, thanks so much for the compliment, so appreciate !

Richard Lamoureux January 29, 2016 at 8:40 AM Did you mean " I didn't know" line four second stanza?? The piece is moving, romantic and sad. I sincerely hope it is made up. Hugs Rick. Constance La France January 29, 2016 at 2:34 PM Oops better fix that, thanks so much Richard for spotting that, you are a friend for sure and thanks for the nice comment, sadly not made up...

Kim Difford January 28, 2016 at 4:23 PM Broken Wings - This is so! exquisite, I love the line 'I could literally hear the angels singing above', when touched by love it feels like that, and 'I did know that I would find my own destiny', deep I love that. All the best with the contest. Kim Difford January 29, 2016 at 2:51 PM Saddened for you it didn't work out, it's not easy. Take it easy, hang in there!!. I am glad you like the word exquisite, it is a delightful word isn't it.. Thoughts, Kim Constance La France January 28, 2016 at 4:33 PM Kim, thanks so much for visiting and oh, I love that word exquisite and thanks for the lovely comment !