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~*~ It was with just a glance and we fell in love, Our hearts touched and that was it; I could literally hear the angels singing above, Wondering, wishing, should I invite him to sit. It had started an ordinary winter day, I had gone for a walk, now I was penning a story; Writing in my journal a poem, I was swept away, I didn't know that I would find my own eternity. It was a small café that I sat quietly writing, He hesitated and sat and it was love at first sight; Peaking at what I had penned, he was soon reading, From that day, we were one, day and night. He asked me to marry him on Valentines Day, We planned and waited one blissful wonderful year; On February 14, we married, that day will always stay, It was God's will, he must go, now but an angel near. Our love darling will never, ever grow cold, Even when this girl is frail and wrinkled old. ___________________________ January 28, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/In Love Forever Copyright Protected, ID 16-749-924-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Our Year In Love Sponsor, Olive Eloisa Guillermo Fourth Place

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Date: 2/21/2016 12:39:00 PM
Very touching write, BW. Love lives in the heart even after...only to keep growing. Congratulations on your winning write. Peace my friend:)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 1:14:00 PM
Daniel, thanks for the congratulations and the lovely comment ~
Date: 2/21/2016 9:40:00 AM
Congrats B.O. to win on the wonderful poem. Love. Anisha D
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:15:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats and the love ~
Date: 2/21/2016 8:52:00 AM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest. Very romantically written..-luloo
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 2/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the visit and the congratulations !
Date: 2/21/2016 7:43:00 AM
This is so tenderly sweet, Constance. Congratulations on the placing. hugs.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 1:17:00 PM
Lin, thanks for the visit and the congratulations and the hugs !
Date: 2/21/2016 4:47:00 AM
Broken Wings, touching, beautiful and sad, all at the same time.
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:17:00 PM
Steve, thanks for the nice comment, so grateful !
Date: 2/21/2016 2:40:00 AM
***My 4th place, thank you for sharing the magical moment, weeeee like you am all modest and demure to wait for the guy to make the first move.. =`) Wow Valentine's day!!! I felt love in every single stanza, the last two stanzas just a great finale!!!KUDOS!~Olive Eloisa
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2016 1:19:00 PM
Olive, thank you for that great contest and for my placement, I am very honored ~
Date: 1/31/2016 4:27:00 AM
how sweet those words are, simply lovely, though sad but it shows one immortal love...the writing of a memory is always superb, and this is an example, excellent write BW, as always...best of luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 4:36:00 AM
Sage, thanks for that lovely comment and the excellent !
Date: 1/30/2016 4:02:00 PM
Love can be so intense that, a moment in time can fill us for a lifetime. Painful, yet beautiful all at once.
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Date: 1/30/2016 6:15:00 PM
Dineed, thank you for that lovely comment , appreciated ~
Date: 1/30/2016 9:14:00 AM
to Truly Love, if only once....is to truly become a dunce....because for Love, we are all fools....because Love requires unconventional rules....like giving up my coat when it's freezing cold....or the willingness to destroy anything that threatens your Soul....Love is so simple to be so very complex....we lose every bit of ourselves because of how Love infects....your heart to forever bind to mine....that's the true Beauty of Love, it lasts through all time....Beautiful write bw....;)
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Date: 1/30/2016 9:25:00 AM
Eric, thanks for the visit and your lovely poetic comment and for the beautiful ....;)
Date: 1/29/2016 10:37:00 AM
Wow! For romantic poetry (as well as others) you are in a class by yourself!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thomas, thanks so much for the compliment, so appreciate !
Date: 1/29/2016 8:40:00 AM
Did you mean " I didn't know" line four second stanza?? The piece is moving, romantic and sad. I sincerely hope it is made up. Hugs Rick.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2016 2:34:00 PM
Oops better fix that, thanks so much Richard for spotting that, you are a friend for sure and thanks for the nice comment, sadly not made up...
Date: 1/28/2016 4:23:00 PM
Broken Wings - This is so! exquisite, I love the line 'I could literally hear the angels singing above', when touched by love it feels like that, and 'I did know that I would find my own destiny', deep I love that. All the best with the contest.
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Kim Difford
Date: 1/29/2016 2:51:00 PM
Saddened for you it didn't work out, it's not easy. Take it easy, hang in there!!. I am glad you like the word exquisite, it is a delightful word isn't it.. Thoughts, Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2016 4:33:00 PM
Kim, thanks so much for visiting and oh, I love that word exquisite and thanks for the lovely comment !

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